McDucky's Arrangements - Umineko: Eternity

[FireArrow]

Feedback on Sacrificial:

Are you done with the song yet, you're missing out on a lot of it.
It's in e minor, not a minor. Don't let the G# throw you off.
Rhythm Grouping on measure 4 should be an eight note tied to a sixteenth instead of a dotted eight. EDIT: Same thing in measure 1.
The first part, you're missing a lot of bass line in what you do have.

[McDucky]

Feedback on Sacrificial:

Are you done with the song yet, you're missing out on a lot of it.
It's in e minor, not a minor. Don't let the G# throw you off.
Rhythm Grouping on measure 4 should be an eight note tied to a sixteenth instead of a dotted eight. EDIT: Same thing in measure 1.
The first part, you're missing a lot of bass line in what you do have.

Just got started on it. I'd say it's about 10% done.

[FireArrow]

Oh, ok, sorry. :3

[Yugi]

Hey you should make a post whenever you make an arrangement otherwise people won't know and I have to physicially remind myself to look at your arrangements.

[McDucky]

Hey you should make a post whenever you make an arrangement otherwise people won't know and I have to physicially remind myself to look at your arrangements.

Thanks, I'll do that

[Maelstrom]

I'm new here, so I hope this makes sense. I'm glad you changed the E#s to F naturals, it was getting to be a pain to sight read. For simplicity's sake, would it be possible to only use sharps OR flats? Preferably sharps, because it is in the key of Em.

[McDucky]

I'm new here, so I hope this makes sense. I'm glad you changed the E#s to F naturals, it was getting to be a pain to sight read. For simplicity's sake, would it be possible to only use sharps OR flats? Preferably sharps, because it is in the key of Em.

Uh, which one?

[Maelstrom]

Woops. *facepalm* I meant Hilda's theme from A link between worlds

[McDucky]

'The Steel Samurai' added

[McDucky]

Added the main theme from "Papers, Please", the #1 Dystopian communist paperwork simulator

[McDucky]

My latest arrangement is the Rocket Jump Waltz from Team Fortress 2

[McDucky]

Added a few more pieces used in "Long Live the Queen"

[McDucky]

LLTQ - Hunting Added

[McDucky]

Adding more Long Live the Queen soundtrack. I have played the game for about half the time I've spent transcribing it's music..

[Olimar12345]

How did I miss this? I can't wait to take a look at these!