Arrangement Project (Paper Mario)

[InsigTurtle]

Ah, that reminds me. Now that I have time, I'm going to finish off the cadenza in Gusty Gulch and submit it soon.

[Sebastian]

Haha ok

[Sebastian]

I just put up "Detective Mario" on the OP (Original Post )

[The Deku Trombonist]

I'll put in a marathon effort on Wednesday night 

[Maelstrom]

YAY!!!!

[Sebastian]

I'll put in a marathon effort on Wednesday night 

Awesome!!!

[The Deku Trombonist]

Angry Bowser:
-Rhythm grouping issues
-Crushed notes in bar 11 (Copy/paste will insta-fix this)
-This really needs the bass line throughout, or at least some representation of the drum beat. Otherwise it's missing the rhythmic drive that makes this song.
-Perhaps go back and have a closer listen, some of the notes sound weird

Gates of Goomba Castle:
-Overlapping notes are hurting this arrangement. Transpose some octaves/remove some doubled octaves/whatever to make it work
-The upbeat could be re-written to better capture the spirit of the thing
-In bars 1, and 4-5 I'm pretty sure you don't need the quaver rests because the notes are from the lower part, not the upper
-The harmonies need some looking at

The Master:
-Have you experimented with different combinations of parts in the opening? It seems like the most prominent part isn't always there.
-Also in the opening, there is a very obvious 2-to-a-bar pulse going on in the original which is missing in the arrangement
-The pitch bending can be approximated in bars 13 to the end
-There's also some pitch bending in the bass part which can be added to the arrangement

[Maelstrom]

I'll make the changes a soon as I finish revising Serpent Devouring the Horizon

[Bloop]

I tried fixing Gates of Goomba Castle the best I could.

[ZIP]

[Sebastian]

nor on a computer

[Sebastian]

-The pitch bending can be approximated in bars 13 to the end
-There's also some pitch bending in the bass part which can be added to the arrangement

Not sure what you mean by this...and its in 2/4 correct?

[Sebastian]

Aaaaaand Fierce and I fixed up ''File Select''
And "Boo's Dance"

[DonValentino]

I've cleaned a little bit the Paper Mario Medley which is already on site. I wanted to have a cleaner version for myself since I like to play it, but I thought that it would be nice to put it here too.

I didn't want to touch it too much though, so only did some formatting and little corrections:

- All song names are now between ""
- Corrected the key change in measure 12
- 2/4 in "Koopa Village" instead of 4/4
- Measure 63: corrected the third chord, F#-D# instead of Gb-Eb

And that's it. All credit goes to the original arranger, of course.

"Paper Mario Medley" MUS - Nacho2420

[Sebastian]

Thank You

[Sebastian]

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