iDOWN's Arrangments (9-20: 3 songs FIX'D!)

[iDOWN]

Which parts sound off? I need to know so I can fix them when I switch it to the right key.

[fpaulgreen]

How far are you on the Power Hungry Fool? That is probably the best song in brawl, and as far as I know, no one has made a good arrangement of it.

[iDOWN]

Eh. Not too far. I only have a few measure so far.
I'm a little busy with other arrangements and fixing the ones I already have up. I almost forgot about it, actually. I'll work on it when I can.

EDIT: I finally finished Hollow Bastion. It's not really great because it's really repetitive.

EDIT2: Power-Hungry Fool is up. I finished it because people kept messaging me about it. Anyway, This is an extremely rough draft. I just laid out the basic stuff. I'm going to continue working on it for a while.

[sonic130]

Which parts sound off? I need to know so I can fix them when I switch it to the right key.

By listening to the song, the notes from measures 26-34 sound off (the right hand). Also, measures 68, 70, 72, and 74 sound off as well (the right hand). But that's about it, and the rest of it is awesome!!  

[fpaulgreen]

Wow, this is really good (power hungry fool)! Measure 2 sounds off (not sure if it's just the change from the harpsichord in Brawl) and wherever it repeats that theme, but the rest is great, especially for the first draft.

[iDOWN]

sonic130: Okay, I think I know what the problem is. I'll fix it when I get home. I'm at a friend's house right now.

fpaulgreen: Yeah, I know what you mean. I was having trouble trying to find a few notes in that measure. I'll go through it a bit.

[fpaulgreen]

I changed it to harpsichord in finale and it sounded fine, so I think it's just that it's piano.

[Lildigipoke2]

Hallow Bastion is very repetitive like you said, but it sounds good

[Echo]

Meh, you could've done more with Hollow Bastion, I'd say. Oh, and the key sig is probably two sharps from what I can tell by skimming through the sheet. Just turn the G flats into F Sharps, D flats into C sharps, and F flats into E naturals and that'll probably get rid of a lot of accidentals. Measure 17 and 18 are off too. I'm actually doing the same song (Chain of Memories version), so after I get a better idea of the song I'll help to fix your sheet.

[Beethoven II]

Your arrangement does not need to be a duet

[MasterPenguin]

I'm quite fond of the Courtney Gears theme. Such a great game. xD.

[iDOWN]

fpaulgreen: Oh, okay then. Good.

Lildigipoke2: Meh, it's very rough. I'll probably work with Echo to get the stuff sounding better. :]

Echo: Yeah, I see what you're saying. I'll fix the key and stuff when I have time. If you need any help with your arrangement, let me know.

Beethoven II: Which one?

MasterPenguin: Haha! Some one I can finally laugh with. xD Thanks. 8P

[Beethoven II]

peach's birthday cake

[iDOWN]

Oh, I put it as a duet to kind of get the rest of the stuff that was going on in the ending, but if no one really thinks it should be there, I'll fix it. :3

[Beethoven II]

please.

oh, on Power-hungry fool, did you do it by ear? anyways. sounds nice. The chords at the end sound a little wrong. and the last measure, the bass should be trilled for a beat or so.