Sebastian's Arrangement Library

[Olimar12345]

some observations:

-The "To Measure 1" is not needed. It repeats back to the forward repeat bar, at measure three. (or, at least, it should)

-Your layers are overlapping at times on the first page (mm. 5, 7, 12, 14, )

-There isn't supposed to be a grace note pick up to measure 36

-Your bass line is off at times

-spirited?

-LH in the last measure is unusually empty.

The LH chords are all triads, there are no four note chords in this one.

Oh, there are 7th chords, as those dominant 7ths beg to differ. Though, mlf, you should reduce the up-beats to only three notes. For the 7th chords, either leave out the root or the fifth, depending on the situation.

[Sebastian]

Thanks a ton, Olimar!
I won't be on my computer till tomorrow so I'll get it then :p

[The Deku Trombonist]

Oh well, that's what I get for typing quickly in rests during rehearsal.

I meant each chord has only 3 notes. The fun comes from trying to hear which 3 notes are there 

[Sebastian]

-The "To Measure 1" is not needed. It repeats back to the forward repeat bar, at measure three. (or, at least, it should)

Fixed

-Your layers are overlapping at times on the first page (mm. 5, 7, 12, 14, )

Fixed

-There isn't supposed to be a grace note pick up to measure 36

Fixed

-Your bass line is off at times

Fixed

-spirited?

Better?

-LH in the last measure is unusually empty.

Fixed

[Sebastian]

Metal Mario (Replacement) from Super Mario 64
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Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SMgqzgRqH7w


Feedback would be amazing!

[Maelstrom]

Feedback would be amazing!

Note beaming.
'Nuff said

[Sebastian]

What?
Where?

[Maelstrom]

Everywhere.

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[Sebastian]

Everywhere.

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No offense, but just yelling measure numbers doesn't help. :/
I'm not breaking any rules in those measures. The 3rd beat is visibile.....

[Maelstrom]

-_-
The 2nd isn't.

[Sebastian]

.....ok

[Maelstrom]

This

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Should be this

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But preferably this

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[Sebastian]

But preferably this

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This is what I had in the first place, but thought it was wrong
Thanks so much! I'll fix that!

[Olimar12345]

You gotta love it when some one uses the phrase "nuff said," then ends up having to explain everything.

[Sebastian]

You gotta love it when some one uses the phrase "nuff said," then ends up having to explain everything.

lol.....yeah
So is "Slide" good Olimar?
Btw, I don't see your name in who's online? That's why I was surprised when I saw your name on her just now