Sebastian's Arrangement Library

[LifeMushroom]

I like this! Are you going to put it on the site?

[Brassman388]

Mushroom Kingdom (Replacement)
[ZIP]

Feedback would be Amazing!

Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CKbWRDhYVGE

Looks pretty good, sounds pretty accurate.

But, I do have a few notes.

In measure 5, you have two layers for a pretty good reason. But the only think is those rests in the second layer are an eye sore. Hide them.

In measure 9, I don't know if you're able to change clefs in mid-staff, but I would make the clef change as soon as the melody hits that octave.

In measure 13, same as measure 5.

In measure 18, for those 16th tuplets, if they;re to be bracketed, make sure that the number is as well. For example, I see two 3's where there should only be a 6. Because there are 6 sixteenth notes bracketed together.

In measure 19 to the end, your melody is high enough here where you can comp style some of those chords rather than leaving them at the bottom like that in your bottom staff. Having chords that low tend to make it too muddy sounding. Raise them for better clarity.

In measure 23 to the end, you don't need to have a key change for that little of staves, since the piece is pretty much done and you're switching back to the tonic key. Get rid of that key change and just write out the Bb.

Like I said, sounds pretty good, but just a few visual things that could be worked on.

Hope this helps.

[Sebastian]

I like this! Are you going to put it on the site?

Yes! And Thanks!

Looks pretty good, sounds pretty accurate.

But, I do have a few notes.

In measure 5, you have two layers for a pretty good reason. But the only think is those rests in the second layer are an eye sore. Hide them.

In measure 9, I don't know if you're able to change clefs in mid-staff, but I would make the clef change as soon as the melody hits that octave.

In measure 13, same as measure 5.

In measure 18, for those 16th tuplets, if they;re to be bracketed, make sure that the number is as well. For example, I see two 3's where there should only be a 6. Because there are 6 sixteenth notes bracketed together.

In measure 19 to the end, your melody is high enough here where you can comp style some of those chords rather than leaving them at the bottom like that in your bottom staff. Having chords that low tend to make it too muddy sounding. Raise them for better clarity.

In measure 23 to the end, you don't need to have a key change for that little of staves, since the piece is pretty much done and you're switching back to the tonic key. Get rid of that key change and just write out the Bb.

Like I said, sounds pretty good, but just a few visual things that could be worked on.

Hope this helps.

Thanks! I lol get right on it!

[AwesomeYears]

Yes! And Thanks!

I think it's the other way around...

[Sebastian]

I think it's the other way around...

Whoops haha. You're right

[Sebastian]

In measure 18, for those 16th tuplets, if they;re to be bracketed, make sure that the number is as well. For example, I see two 3's where there should only be a 6. Because there are 6 sixteenth notes bracketed together.

In measure 19 to the end, your melody is high enough here where you can comp style some of those chords rather than leaving them at the bottom like that in your bottom staff. Having chords that low tend to make it too muddy sounding. Raise them for better clarity.

In measure 23 to the end, you don't need to have a key change for that little of staves, since the piece is pretty much done and you're switching back to the tonic key. Get rid of that key change and just write out the Bb.

Fixed

In measure 5, you have two layers for a pretty good reason. But the only think is those rests in the second layer are an eye sore. Hide them.

In measure 13, same as measure 5.

How do I hide rests?

In measure 9, I don't know if you're able to change clefs in mid-staff, but I would make the clef change as soon as the melody hits that octave.

It'd be messy...

[Maelstrom]

How do I hide rests?

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[Sebastian]

Lol...Thanks

[Sebastian]

Fixed everything in "Mushroom Kingdom."


Meanwhile.....

2 replacements from Luigi's Mansion.

E Gadd's Theme  NEW!!!
[ZIP]
Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5xk8-dDqu50


Talking with Ghosts NEW!!!
[ZIP]
Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rliq9zkZB3I

Feedback would be Fantastic!

[Sebastian]

Another replacement from Luigi's Mansion.

Mansion (Exterior) NEW!!!
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Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CZAAwlViCUo

Feedback would be Groundbreaking!

[Sebastian]

Here is a replacement from Mario & Luigi: Superstar Saga

Bean Bean Castle NEW!!!
[ZIP]

Feedback would be spectacular!

Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OxN2Xxe3O_w

[Dudeman]

Ooooo! Superstar Saga! I'll have to take a look at this as soon as I get the chance.

[Sebastian]

Awesome! There are 3 others I'm doing from this game, so hang tight!

[Sebastian]

Here is another replacement from Mario & Luigi: Superstar Saga.

Cackletta's Theme NEW!!!
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Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IXXJwpPvFcM

[Maelstrom]

Surprisingly good!
Except for the overlapping slurs.