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Started by Sebastian, October 19, 2012, 08:26:02 AM

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jegilmer

OK cool, I wasn't sure. I'd heard that you can just leave it as the C Major sig too, but G makes sense. Thanks!

Sebastian

Hey Guys!
Again....forgive me for the lack of arranging :P
I should have "Theme of the Shadow Sirens" on tomorrow.
Currently arranging it :)



Sebastian

Theme of the Shadow Sirens NEW!!!
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Another from TTYD! Please, feedback would be great!!

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Here is the current "score"
If any one would like to do "Madame Flurrie's Theme"
"More Danger" 
or  "Magnus von Grapple" That would be great!!!

Originals

Story of The Thousand Year Door   Done by Spitllama
Title Screen & Main Menu  Done by Spitllama
Mario and Luigi's House - Done by mariolegofan
Adventure Begins - Done by Bloop   
Chapter Opening - Done by Bloop
Rogueport - Done by YouAreNotATadpole
Danger! - Done by mariolegofan
Event Battle - Done by Nintendude73
Battle Won with Injured Partner - Done by Bloop
A New Partner Joins - Done by Bloop
Character Abilities - Done by mariolegofan
Professor Frankly's Theme - Done by Jeglimer
Training Battle - Done by mariolegofan
Rogueport Sewers (Replacement) - Done by Bloop 
Battle Theme (Replacement)   
Hall of the Thousand Year Door - In Progress by Jegilmer 
Petal Meadows (Replacement) - Done by Bloop
Petalburg - Done by Dekutrombonist
You got Mail! - Done by Bloop
Level Up! - Done by Bloop
The 65th Super Fun Quirk Quiz - In Progress by Bloop 
Right! - Done by Bloop
Taking a Nap - Done by mariolegofan
Hooktail Castle Appears - Done by Bloop
Hooktail Castle - Done by Jeglimer
Ms. Mowz's Theme 
Boss - Hooktail - In Progress by Bloop 
Reunion - Done by mariolegofan
Get the Crystal Star - Done by Bloop
Chapter Ending  Done by mariolegofan
Princess Peach's Theme - Done by mariolegofan
Peach Mail (Replacement) - Done by Bloop 
Luigi's Story (Replacement) 
Theme of the Punies - Done by mariolegofan 
Boggly Woods - In Progress by Jegilmer 
Theme of the Shadow Sirens - Done by mariolegofan
The Great Boggly Tree 
Boss - The Shadow Sirens (Shadow Siren Scuffle) - Done by Spitllama
Madame Flurrie's Theme 
More Danger 
Magnus von Grapple 
Boss - Magnus von Grapple (Replacement) - Done by mariolegofan 
TEC's Waltz 
Bowser's Theme 
Bowser's Quest World 1-1 
Bowser's Quest - Invincible 
Bowser's Quest - Lose Life 
Bowser's Quest - Level Clear - Done by Bloop 
Don Pianta's Theme 
Mini Game 
The Robbo Thieves
The Blimp Ride 
Glitzville   
The Glitz Pit - Done by The Deku Trombonist
Grubba's Theme
Glitz Pit Intro - Done by Bloop
Glitz Pit Outro - Done by Bloop
Paper Mario & The Giant Egg 
X-Mail - Done by Jegilmer
Boss - Rawk Hawk 
Treacherous Grubba  Boss - Macho Grubba 
Ms. Jolene's Theme - Done by mariolegofan
Twilight Town - Done by mariolegofan
Twilight Trail 
Creepy Steeple 
Doopliss's Theme 
Boss - Doopliss - Done by mariolegofan
Bowser's Quest - 2-1 
Cooking with Zess T. 
Voyage 
Pirate Ghosts Appear 
Keelhaul Key   
Pirate's Grotto 
Boss - Cortez (Replacement) 
Disk System Startup - Done by Bloop 
Pit of 100 Trials 
The Excess Express 
Pennington's Theme - Done by Brassman
Dusk 
Riverside Station 
Boss - The Smorgs   
Poshley Heights - Done by Spitllama
The Sactum 
Bowser's Quest - World 3-1
Fahr Outpost 
Shooting for the Stars 
X-Naut Fortress (Replacement) 
The Palace of Shadow 
Tower of Riddles 
Deep into the Shadows 
Boss - Grodus 
Boss - Bowser 
Shadow Queen Awakens  Done by Bloop
Boss - Shadow Queen Part 1 (Peach Form) (Replacement) 
We Believe in You Mario! - Done by mariolegofan
Boss - Shadow Queen Part 2 - Done by mariolegofan
Peach is Saved 
Leaving Rogueport 
Going Home 
Shining Rogueport 
Here we Go Again   
Game Over 
Staff Credits
Found a Badge - Done by Bloop
Found an Important - Done by Bloop
Get Important Item - Done by Bloop
Secret Revealed - Done by Bloop
Get Important Item - Done by Bloop





Sebastian

Magnus von Grapple Battle NEW!!!
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Aaaaaaaand Another from TTYD! Please, feedback would be great......again :)

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Sebastian

Sorry for my absence guys. I've been at a music conference for the past 2 days. I have TEC's Waltz done but am not on my computer. Should have it on tonight! :)


Good day!



Sebastian

TEC's Waltz NEW!!!
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A fun little waltz.
Please, feedback would be GREAT......again....and again :)

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Sebastian




Sebastian

The Robbo Thieves NEW!!!
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Original: www.youtube.com/watch?v=HCAeF0OYY08


This one was pretty challenging note and accidental wise.         
 
Bump to feedback. Jompa, Bloop, Fiercedeity, Olimar12345.....anybody?
Feedback would be great!! :)



Sebastian

The Blimp Ride NEW!!!
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Original: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4op9f293DrY

         
Much harder than I thought it was going to be...haha :P



DonValentino

Very good! In measures 18 and 19 the D sharps of the left hand should be E flats.

Ahhh Super Mario Bros 3

Bloop

Ohgawd nobody has responded here yet? D:

I'll just give feedback to everything from Theme of the Shadow Sirens and on. I need to give feedback more ,_,

Theme of the Shadow Sirens
Measure 2: I'd bring back the music box-ish chords back in the right hand instead of the sound effect. I think it'll sound nicer
Measure 16-21: Try to arrange the bass tune in this part. It sounds empty as it is now.
Measure 25-32: And to prevent further emptiness, try arranging the chords in this part like you did in measure 23-24. You also might wanna look back at the bass; listening to a song with headphones will usually make the bass clearer to arrange.

Magnus von Grapple Battle
The arrangement isn't as powerful as the song should feel. Try using more octaves and/or some of the other voices in the background. Also:
Measure 1: The notes in the left hand can be played by the right hand easily. This'll make it possible for the left hand to play the bass. Melody and bass are the two most important things in (piano) music; Always try to include these as much as possible.

TEC'S Waltz
This one's nice! A few things though:
Measure 12-17: Try using ottava (8va) markings instead of changing clefs. As it is now, it's kinda confusing. Also did you miss a staccato dot in measure 15 (left hand)? :p
Measure 19: The left hand chord is impossible; try to tone down with the notes/octaves

King Bowser's Theme
Try playing around with the accidentals a bit more. The left hand is really confusing (and don't be too afraid to use sharps or (double) flats :) ).

Bowser's Quest: Invincible
I think you could just cut the sheet down to two bars and add a repeat marking.

Bowser's Quest: Miss
Isn't this song a biiit faster?

The Robbo Thieves
Measure 9-15: Trill markings are supposed to be above a note, not below.
Measure 17-20: Play around with the accidentals to get rid of naturals and try to not use too many sharps and flats in one measure

The Blimp Ride
Measure 10-17: Remove every bottom note of the 2nd layer in the right hand to make the song more playable.
Measure 22-25: Move every C in the left hand up an octave. This is almost unplayable.

EDIT: Oh hai der you were quicker than me

Sebastian




Sebastian

Quote from: Bloop on August 09, 2014, 01:57:40 PMMeasure 22-25: Move every C in the left hand up an octave. This is almost unplayable.
Here I think I'll leave it. Personally I can reach a tenth and I think it sounds best that way. Maybe I can put, "Roll for people with small hands"....ok?



Bloop

Quote from: mariolegofan on August 09, 2014, 02:09:03 PMHere I think I'll leave it. Personally I can reach a tenth and I think it sounds best that way. Maybe I can put, "Roll for people with small hands"....ok?
That's possible, but personally playing the other notes afterwards gets a bit hard.

Sebastian