Sebastian's Arrangement Library

[Bloop]

Maybee...

[Sebastian]

Okay........ Bloop......... Thanks for the advice.
I know those dynamics and cresendos arnt in the original song. i just added those for fun. So if its no problem im gonna keep those, but i will take the left hand dynamics out and heed your other advice.

[Sebastian]

Are my dropbox arrangments working?

[Bloop]

Well, no, actually the Volcanic Overworld MUS is the only one working, all other ones are linking to a 403 error page.

How to Dropbox (Like a Boss)


Place your file(s) into the public folder.


Right click on your file and navigate to "Dropbox -> Copy public link"

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/36661985/File.txt
Paste the link to your thread.

Walk away.

Also, I would still remove the crescendos and decrescendos. A sheet of mine (Final Hours) didn't got accepted at first because of a crescendo that wasn't needed.

[Sebastian]

okay

[Bloop]

Walking on the Clouds
Bar 1 (and wherever this reoccurs): I would use a half rest here, and not two quarter rests.
Bar 2 (and wherever this reoccurs): And here I would use a dotted whole note.
Bar 5-6: The dynamics here are unnecessary.

World 7 map:
Bar 1: Only one dynamic is needed.
Bar 1-4: I think you could better use a ottava (8va) marking here, because the high A is hard to read.

Forever Forest:
Bar 1 (and wherever this reoccurs): I personally would switch the right and left hand. It would be easier to play. Also, only one dynamic is needed here.
Bar 17 (and wherever this reoccurs): I would use a half rest here, and not two quarter rests.
Bar 20: The dynamic here is slightly misplaced.

You did do a better job at these ones, though. Nice!

[Sebastian]

Thanks bloop. I will make those changes very soon!

UPDATE!! This was a tricky song that might still have quite a few mistakes but i put it on.
Alex Kidd in the Enchanted Castle

Castle
[Midi]
[Mus]
[Pdf]
[Original]

[Sebastian]

 please critic Castle and item C/Pelicopter from alex kidd from the enchanted castle soon!

[Sebastian]

I just decide to do new super mario bros wii sheets instead of mario and sonic at the london 2012 olympic games.
I wil be doing Ghost House, Mini Boss Win/Lose, and Underground Background Music.

[mammamiaboy]

hello,
I dont mean to intrude, but I was wondering if you could do world map 4 from new super mario bros wii?
I started it once but i couldnt figure out how to do it.

thank you!

[Bloop]

Castle
-The 8vb markings are placed a bit to high sometimes. I would lower them a bit.
Bar 13-16: It would be easier to read if the Eb's here are D#'s.
Bar 16: The timing of the notes here are a bit off:

Bar 17-20: It would be easier to read if the notation here was like this:

Bar 21-23: The notes here are F#-A#-B-F#-A#-B-etc. Also, I think the left hand in bar 22 was meant to be like bar 14.
Bar 24: I don't know if it's possible in your version of Finale, but this bar has a time signature of 2/4.

Item C
This sure is a weird song...
-I would change the C#-C note combinations into Db-C, just like the D#-D's to Eb-D.
-The whole bass line is in legato, so remove the staccato articulations.
Bar 23: The bass on the 3rd beat are two G's, not two D's.
Bar 28: The bass here is C-C-A-E-C-C-A-E
Bar 29: The bass here is G-G-E-D-G-G-E-D
Bar 32: The bass here is the same as in bar 5.

[Sebastian]

Castle
-The 8vb markings are placed a bit to high sometimes. I would lower them a bit.
Bar 13-16: It would be easier to read if the Eb's here are D#'s.
Bar 16: The timing of the notes here are a bit off:

Bar 17-20: It would be easier to read if the notation here was like this:

Bar 21-23: The notes here are F#-A#-B-F#-A#-B-etc. Also, I think the left hand in bar 22 was meant to be like bar 14.
Bar 24: I don't know if it's possible in your version of Finale, but this bar has a time signature of 2/4.

Item C
This sure is a weird song...
-I would change the C#-C note combinations into Db-C, just like the D#-D's to Eb-D.
-The whole bass line is in legato, so remove the staccato articulations.
Bar 23: The bass on the 3rd beat are two G's, not two D's.
Bar 28: The bass here is C-C-A-E-C-C-A-E
Bar 29: The bass here is G-G-E-D-G-G-E-D
Bar 32: The bass here is the same as in bar 5.

Thank You Bloop!
I will make those changes later today!
What ninsheetmusic do without you!

hello,
I dont mean to intrude, but I was wondering if you could do world map 4 from new super mario bros wii?
I started it once but i couldnt figure out how to do it.

thank you!

Yes! I would love to take it for you!

[Sebastian]

Zeldpianist
I think i will take world map 3 that you requested from new super mario bros wii!

[Sebastian]

I polished up all my sheets and corrected all my incorrections, thanks to Bloop!
Have a good day everyone and, Bloop, continue to critic me on my future pieces!

[TheZeldaPianist275]

Thanks.  Sounds lovely.

And Bloop... wow.  You're being pretty awesome.