Sebastian's Arrangement Library

[Jompa]

You've got accidental mistakes in measures#7, #15 and #31.
There's notation error in the right hand in measures#15, #26, #35, #38 and #40, and there's notation error in the left hand in measures#9 through #15.
Other than that, it's pretty good!

[Sebastian]

thx

[Sebastian]

NEW!
A Princess in Distress
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Please Guys, I NEEEED advice and Criticism on ALL my NEW!!! Arrangments or I wont grow at arranging 

[Jompa]

All the places where you do the "dotted quarter - eight rest - quarter" thing - why not just use "half - quarter"? That would look better.

Measure#4: Cb should be B natural.

In measure#23: The C# should be Db. You might wanna parenthesize it, but that's up to you.

Also: That bow that goes over the entire song; I don't know if you intend it to be a phrase bow or a legato bow, but you should at least stop it at that measure with the break, and start it in the next measure.

Other than that, it's good.

[FierceDeity]

What Jompa said about Princess in Distress is good (as always, haha). Personally, though, I'd like to see some articulation marked, especially seeing as it's such a nice, simple piece, and note length and attack are what I feel like give it its character. The emphasized downbeat and shortened beats 2 and 3 in the left hand (at least, in most of the bars) are what make this song have a sort of waltz-like feel. You have the foundation down well; articulation is just one more step in refining it.
Oh, and as far as note length goes, I'd suggest changing the quarter note in the right hand at bar 7 to a dotted half. And, for the "dotted quarter - eight rest - quarter" figure Jompa pointed out, I think it's probably okay the way it is, because currently, it implies the correct amount of space between notes. That's one I'm not too sure about; it's fine either way, really.
...Based on his track record, I'd probably just listen to Jompa on that one, haha.

[DonValentino]

Here's some feedback:

Paper Mario - "File Select"

- Measure 7: The octava bassa isn't necessary for that last G.
- Measure 8: the A flat should be G sharp.
- Measure 9: the D flat should be C sharp.


And that's it with that arrangement. Good job.

[Sebastian]

Thx Fellas! Ill get to work on those

[Sebastian]

Hey Guys!
I am currently working on The Underwhere from Super Paper Mario and its pretty tough!
Please if anyone has a request for me to do. Please tell me. I like paper mario songs 

[ALPRAS]

Pretty cool arrangements you got there Congrats!

Since you like Paper Mario songs, you could make Cont Bleck's theme from Super Paper Mario!

[Sebastian]

Thanks!
Yeah, im a Paper Mario kind of Guy!
I think when Im finished I will do Count Bleck's Theme
Check my first post to see what I will be doing in the future.

Fixed: I put the songs on my first post that I will be doing in the future.
From Paper Mario, Super Paper Mario, and Luigi's Mansion: Dark Moon

[JDMEK5]

Why did you have to get yourself an avatar that looks so similar to mine? I'm getting confused!

[BlackDragonSlayer]

Why did you have to get yourself an avatar that looks so similar to mine? I'm getting confused!

So I wasn't the only one to think that...

[FireArrow]

I think when Im finished I will do Count Bleck's Theme

Be careful, that's an extremely hard song to arrange (are you thinking of "The Evil Count Bleck" or "Count Bleck's Plan"?)

[ALPRAS]

Be careful, that's an extremely hard song to arrange (are you thinking of "The Evil Count Bleck" or "Count Bleck's Plan"?)

Indeed, I tried it myself and I had to give up. All musics in general from Super Paper Mario are hard to arrange...
I hope you can do it, if you can't, well, you still gain some experience. You need to be an expert to do this one...

[Sebastian]

Why did you have to get yourself an avatar that looks so similar to mine? I'm getting confused!

Sorry, I didn't mean to copy you