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Started by Sebastian, October 19, 2012, 08:26:02 AM

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Sebastian


Hailfire Peaks NEW!!! from Banjo-Tooie
[ZIP]

Very fun to arrange and play.
Feedback would be great! :)
Will have "Forest Maze" on tomorrow. Im done with it but to lazy to put it on tonight :P




Bloop

Very nice! Just a few small things:

-Make sure the mf is at the start of the piece, and not when the melody begins.
-Change the C#'s in bar 21 to Db's (and don't forget to note the D in bar 22 as natural afterwards). Do this when this reoccurs.

Sebastian

Quote from: Bloop on November 07, 2014, 07:18:37 AMVery nice! Just a few small things:

-Make sure the mf is at the start of the piece, and not when the melody begins.
-Change the C#'s in bar 21 to Db's (and don't forget to note the D in bar 22 as natural afterwards). Do this when this reoccurs.
Ok. Thanks. I put the mf there because it's right after the repeat. But since the volume doesn't change throughout the piece you're right :)



Sebastian

Quote from: Bloop on November 07, 2014, 07:18:37 AMVery nice! Just a few small things:

-Make sure the mf is at the start of the piece, and not when the melody begins.
-Change the C#'s in bar 21 to Db's (and don't forget to note the D in bar 22 as natural afterwards). Do this when this reoccurs.
Fixed :)
Are you sure thats everything? It seems weird that I dont have miles of mistakes.



Bloop

Well, lately the only issues you make are probably enharmonic spellings, and there weren't a lot of that in this one. You're improving! :D

Btw (I didn't notice this at first) the title at pages 2 and 3 are missing the quotation marks, but that's just a small thing.

Sebastian




braix

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Jompa

Birdo for Smash

Sebastian




Sebastian


Online Waiting Room NEW!!! from Mario Kart 8
[ZIP]
Kinda challenging....but did it :)
Feedback would be great! :)




Jompa

Notebeaming in Measure#20:
you now have 16-16-16-8-8-16-(16)-8-16-(16)-16-16-16 (parenthesis means break), but it should be
16-16-16-16-(16)-8-16-(16)-8-16-(16)-16-16-16.

Other than that it's good!
Birdo for Smash

Sebastian

Quote from: Jompa on November 15, 2014, 06:17:30 AMNotebeaming in Measure#20:
you now have 16-16-16-8-8-16-(16)-8-16-(16)-16-16-16 (parenthesis means break), but it should be
16-16-16-16-(16)-8-16-(16)-8-16-(16)-16-16-16.

Other than that it's good!
Thanks :) I'll get on it.
Finally got the Key Sigs right....for once :P



Sebastian

File Select NEW!!! from Super Mario 64
[ZIP]
I did something a little wacky with this one...lol. I have a small feeling that this song should be 15/8..?
Feedback would be great! :)




Jompa

The zip-link is just "http:/" right now, so we can't find your arrangement.

Quote from: mariolegofan on November 15, 2014, 09:26:49 AMI have a small feeling that this song should be 15/8..?
No, it's in 4/4.
15/8 is practically the same as 5/4 with underlying tuplet eights
Birdo for Smash

Sebastian

Fixed that....sorry.
I have it in 5/4 right now.....it doesnt sound like its in 4/4...