Sebastian's Arrangement Library

Started by Sebastian, October 19, 2012, 08:26:02 AM

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Jompa

Why would you use E-flat when there are D-sharps in the key signature? That should be changed, especially because you only use those in chords where there already is an E-natural.
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Quote from: Jompa on January 29, 2014, 11:06:36 AMWhy would you use E-flat when there are D-sharps in the key signature? That should be changed, especially because you only use those in chords where there already is an E-natural.
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Jompa

Wrong note in measure#11 - should be Ab instead of G.
Wrong beaming of notes in measure#7 - make sure all the beats are visible.
In measure#15, you should change those two fourth rests into one half rest.
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This one was kinda fun to do :)

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Paper Mario
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jegilmer

Sounds awesome! I didn't hear anything that sounded off from the original. You always do really good work! Paper Mario has one of the best game OST's!

FierceDeity

Nice job. Here's what I've noticed so far.

-Bars 1-2, where you have that descending "A, G#, G" in the right hand, they should have "C#, B#, B" on top of them. I'd also put a staccato on beat 3 in the right hand, and add another quarter note E (this one tenuto) on beat 4 in the second layer.
-That F# on beat 1 of measure 4 in the left hand should have a courtesy accidental.
-The articulation in the LH in measure 4 is a little off; I would keep the second and fourth eighth notes staccato, but have the notes before slurring into them.

I'm too tired to look into it any more right now, but I may have another look at it tomorrow.

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I still would like feedback on "We Believe in You, Mario" please :)



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Here is my to-do list

Animal Crossing City Folk
Neapolitan (Aircheck)

Animal Crossing Wild World
Post Office

Chip's Challenge
Exit Ditty    Original: http://www.mediafire.com/download/oi0hqi100egccn2/DITTY1.WAV

Diddy Kong Racing
Frosty Village (Replacement)

Donkey Kong 2
Bayou Boogie

Mario Kart
GBA Bowser Castle 3 3%
MKDS Delfino Square

Paper Mario: The Thousand Year Door
Doopliss Battle (Replacement)
Glitzville
Peach Mail!
Shadow Queen Battle Part 2

Pokemon Puzzle League
Lorelei's Theme 2%

Super Paper Mario
Event Switch
World of Nothing


I hope to have Lorelei's Theme done soon, theblackgiantdoghead44 :)
Sorry for how long it's been taking  :-\
I also hope to have over 300 arrangements done and be a Vetaran Arranger by the time I go to college :) (2-3 years) I wont be able to arrange in college cause Nsm is locked there ::) But I will in the summer :)
And I hope to have Gourmet Race done by tomorrow :)

Good day to you all!  ;D



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