Dangerous Secrets Discussion

[RAWRZEZ~]

Anything regaurding my story please post here! Constructive Critisism is welcome, for I want to make this story the best it could be so tell me if I should fix something. Thank you for reading my story   

[K-NiGhT]

Needs more Marty. That is all.

[RAWRZEZ~]

Lol XD Marty can be any character you think you are lol. Im not re-writting it just to put you in, sorry ^_^

[K-NiGhT]

Oh yeah you finished it already.

[K-NiGhT]

Lol I think they took down that little blue slide at the pool. Last year maybe?

[RAWRZEZ~]

Lol yeah, I wrote it before I noticed that ^_^ I've only been to the pool once this year though I don't miss that slide- way too short and boring XD

[K-NiGhT]

I got a bruise on that slide once. It hurt.