HungryDragon's Arrs [Updated August 18 2009]

[HungryDragon]

Well... Here are my arrangements

Comments and Criticism are encouraged

Ready for Submission
[PS2] Kingdom Hearts II ; Organization XIII MID | MUS

In Progress
[GCN] Tales of Symphonia ; A Wood Carving Star - Revision by HungryDragon

Completed, and Submitted
[GCN] - Final Fantasy: Crystal Chronicles
Today Arrives, Becoming Tomorrow

[GCN] - Tales of Symphonia
Far From Our Word
Fatalize - Revision
The End of A Thought - Revision

[Gu4n]

Anyone prepared to give feedback? I'm completely new to Final Fantasy Crystal Chronicles-music. =p

[blah54]

no offence to you... but who would want to read "Eternal oath"... the notes are all over the places and not properly notated, it looks like it was either copied directly from a midi or you were not thinking when you arranged this...

as for far from our world, it is decent, didn't find any errors...

[HungryDragon]

I was kinda aware that Eternal Oath was a little iffy  But I had posted it elsewhere and wasn't getting feedback on it... It was a lot worse before though... >.> I'll try and clean it up.

[Nintendude73]

Far From Our World needs to be formatted correctly, and fix the squished notes.  I'll check the accuracy if this is fixed.

[Nintendude73]

Fatalize revision accepted.  It will still show G-Han as the arranger on the site, by your name is credited on the sheet.

[HungryDragon]

[UPDATE]

Moved "Far From Our World" to Submissions

[ALPRAS]

Very Good arrangement 
If you want, you can check out my arrangements too

[HungryDragon]

Thanks 

I'll be a little slower at arranging for a little while (not like I have been  ) There's a song from Trauma Center 2 that I would like to do, but we recently sold our piano so I haven't been able to plunk it out (Severing the Chains of Fate if you're wondering ^_^) We'll be picking up a keyboard early August so I can begin again... I miss my piano 

I'll be sure to check yours out when I have some free time on my hands 

[HungryDragon]

I'm back and I have 2 sheets ready. One of them needed a good rewrite. And one that needed slight editing

Added 'The End of a Thought' It's known on the site as 'Kratos Match'

Edited 'Far From Our World'

[HungryDragon]

[UPDATE]

ADDED:
[PS2] Kingdom Hearts II ; Organization XII to Ready for Submission

MOVED:
[GCN] Tales of Symphonia ; The End of A Thought to Completed, and Submitted
[GCN] Tales of Symphonia ; Far From Our World to Completed, and Submitted

Had some free time so I plunked out "Organization XIII" from Kingdom Hearts II. I'm quite pleased with it, as I really enjoy this song. Although the beginning doesn't seem to have the right tempo... Suggestions?

Edit: Changed the time sig in Measure 9 to 2/4; That note was just too long