razer84's arrangements (5/2) (updated/changed song)

[razer84]

Submission:
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Waiting (please give feedback):
[PS2] Metal Gear Solid 3 - 'Snake Eater' - razer84
[Wii] Super Smash Bros. Brawl- Bramble Blast - razer84

Previous Submissions:
[PS2] Metal Gear Solid 2 - Updated Main Theme - razer84

[Gu4n]

You won a refridgerator, as you're the only one who submitted his sheet right. =p

[razer84]

You won a refridgerator, as you're the only one who submitted his sheet right. =p

yipee!

so when can i submit the non-Nintendo stuff?

[Gu4n]

Can't really say.

[razer84]

Can't really say.

Anyway, how does next week sound?

i take that as an answer...

[Gu4n]

Next week is not this week heh. =p So submit a Nintendo-sheet this week, and a Sony one next week.

[razer84]

Next week is not this week heh. =p So submit a Nintendo-sheet this week, and a Sony one next week.

i know, but if i submit it this week, it will most likely be added next week.

[Gu4n]

Uhm, yeah. xD

[razer84]

could you guys check out Bramble Blast and tell me what you think? i think either something is missing or out of place, but i'm not quite sure what exactly it is.

[Beethoven II]

Hey bud, you needed a key sig.  fix'd: http://www.mediafire.com/?0nh4mxtt2wx

Now there are no sharps, flats, or naturals

As for sound, i can't tell because my speakers are off, and i'm supposed to be in bed.

[razer84]

enigma binary code.

but i can fix that one myself. thanks.

[pumpy_heart]

Dude....Snake Eater justs sounds wrong.
Not a good rendering of it.
First off, it goes too fast. Secondly, it looks messy. Finally, it's missing some key parts. This is why it sounds so empty in a couple of places.
I started this about 2 weeks ago and here is what mine is. I think some comparisons can be made for the better. I havent finished this, but you can use this as an aid to improve your own.
http://www.mediafire.com/?izpzj1iynmz
Yeah. I never felt the main theme restated in your version, but it gets restated many times. That's why I like this song so much.
Anyways, I hope I dont sound like a snob or anything, but I think you can fix some stuff in leui of comparing our version.

[razer84]

yeah, i'm still real new in arranging stuff so any advise or criticism is totally welcome and appreciated.

EDIT: enigma binary file.

[Limbo]

I'd love to hear the Snake Eater one, but it's a Enigma Binary file. Both of them are. Well, to me they are.

[blah54]

your bramble blast arrangement is fairly accurate... but it's basically just melody at this point, very little harmony, making it not really a very good piano arrangement at the moment (no offense to you)...

try and find something to add for bass/harmony, then it shouldn't sound as empty...