Spitllama's arrangements (Paper Mario TTYD "Story of The Thousand-Year Door")

[Jompa]

yeah, but that is a bit ... when you are going from D# to a D..

[FireArrow]

Shows how much I know...

I don't know where I read it/heard it, but I was taught that if your ascending in chromatic half steps, you would use naturals and sharps to notate it, and if your descending, you use flats and naturals to notate it.

[Jompa]

Yes, you are right. Don't worry
For some reason the arrangement suddenly changed from when I commented on the accidentals, and is now incorrect at measure#4
The E# and the B# are wrong.

[Jompa]

Well, now you have a Fb..?
Other than that it's perfect.

[spitllama]

Gosh dangit. Now it's fixed.

[spitllama]

This part of the film evokes so much emotion. The only reason people seem to hate this movie is because this song and story makes them cry through the first 20 minutes xD
I'd really appreciate critiques on this one. It's long, so I didn't spend as much time on each individual measure as I probably should have. There are also just a ton of instruments to account for.

Disney & Pixar's Up-

Married Life
Original
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[Yugi]

Seems pretty good.

[DonValentino]

Very nice! These Pixar movie songs are awesome.

[SlowPokemon]

I hate how overused the Up theme is~ I also resent that it won an Oscar.

However I must say this piece is good. It's the sole reason I have the piano book for Up.

[spitllama]

Super Paper Mario-

Champion of Destruction (replacement) (requested by FireArrow)
Original
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[FireArrow]

So I downloaded an mp3 and listened to it, and I wasn't imagining things, there are hidden voices! This song is like a fugue.

If you don't mind, I'm gonna go over your arrangement and add in the voices.

[spitllama]

Go for it

[FireArrow]

I finished the first half of the song, hopefully I'll get to the rest tomorrow.

[spitllama]

Doesn't sound the same without percussion...

Super Smash Bros. Brawl-

Bramble Blast (replacement)
Original
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[FireArrow]

Is measure 25 (and similar ones) possible?