SlowPokemon's Arrangements--NEW Ace Attorney (June 11)

[triforced1]

I would make a PDF of this, but unfortunately my charger for my computer kind of exploded (thanks Apple). I can't exactly listen to it on my phone either. :/

[SlowPokemon]

You can't listen to midi files on your phone? Wow. I appreciate the thought though. I want to know it's good enough before I get a PDF anyway.

[SlowPokemon]

(This is where people feedback and stuff) D: sorry if I'm being annoying with this I just kind of what to know what some problems are, I want this arrangement to be good.

[dahans]

Staff roll... had to listen to it on youtube again... xD
Ahhhhhhhhh remember, that's a nice theme.

Alright, your arrangement seems to be totally accurate and playable. Just one thing.... why is the bassline soooooo loud? I know it's not your fault, but it would be nicer if it were a little more quiet.

[Shadoninja]

Staff Roll

Measures 1-2 - The Marimba notes have harmony notes that are about a third below. Beats 1 and 2 of measure 2 should be reversed so it'd be dotted eigthth sixteenth(repeating the same notes), quarter. I think beat 4 should be a dotted eighth sixteenth to lead into the whole notes with the harmony being an Eb below (I could be wrong about the harmony)

Measures 3-4 - there are missing harmony notes and there needs to be bass there. I believe the harmony notes to be Eb and D Respectively.

Measures 5-6 - 7 beats of silence is too much. I'd remove measure 5. Also, measure 6's rests should be simplified to a half rest and quarter rest in both hands.

Measures 2-4 - beat 4 to measure 4 need to be 8va'd. Optionally it could start at beat 2 so there's no large leap in eye movement.

(measure numbers from here on are listed under the assumption that measure 5 has been removed)

Measure 10 - the rests should be simplified.

Measures 11-18 - you're not going to add those offbeat notes? I think they add a lot of the marching characteristic. they're fine as is if you don't want to add them.

Measure 19-32 - I'd consider splitting the quarter rests on beat 2 to two eighth rests. I'm not sure if it's musically incorrect or not but it helps the performer visualize where beat 1 and 2 are in my opinion.

Measure 51 - 52 - right hand needs to be 8va'd

Measure 53 - simplify the rests.

Measure 78, 80 - split the eighth note on the a of 3 into two tied sixteenths, similar to measure 79 and 81

Measure 82-89 - you did a great job with the rhythm in the bass at Measure 78-80, I don't see why you over simplified this part. The right hand needs a reduction in unnecessary rests.

Measure 94-101 - like in measure 11-18 I think the offbeats here would add a lot of that marching feel, especially since this part is towards the ending of the piece and helps it drive until the ending.

Measure 95, 97 - the second eighth note in the right hand needs to be split into two tied sixteenths.

Measure 98-101 - in the right hand, I think you should make the rhythm of the first two beats dotted eighth sixteenth tied to an eighth eighth.

Measures 102-105 - I think the bass should imitate the timpani part which plays an eighth note on the and of 4 in measures 102 and 104.

Measure 106 - Needs rests to finish the measure in the left hand. It sounds like there's a note that repeats itself in that sixteenth note run. I believe it's the top F.

[SlowPokemon]

Alright! Let's see if this is better:

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[Olimar12345]

Where are your compositions posted?

[SlowPokemon]

in the creativity corner, in the board "Home made compositions"...ignore the first couple if you want cause they're somewhat awful, but I'm mainly interested in the latest two.

[fingerz]

Alright! Let's see if this is better:

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Very nice, Slow! You've done a wonderful job at capturing the mood of the piece. Keep up the awesome arranging!

[SlowPokemon]

Replacement of my Route 4 arrangement. I fixed some stuff and made it cleaner.

Route 4 (Replacement)
[MUS]
[MIDI]

Could I have a PDF of this and my Staff Roll from BIS? Please?

[SlowPokemon]

So I'm really bored, so I'm gonna arrange some Animal Crossing time themes. I don't need a PDF if no one wants to make one, cause I'm not sure if I want to submit them to the site. This one in particular is so simplistic it's ridiculous.

Animal Crossing: Wild World
3 PM
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[spitllama]

Animal Crossing: Wild World
3pm
[PDF]

Pokemon B/W
Route 4
[PDF]
Musical Hall
[PDF]

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon
Explorers Theme (also labelled route 6)
[PDF]

Pokemon HG/SS
Pokemaniac
[PDF]

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon
Apple Woods
[PDF]

Super Mario Bros 3
Desert Land
[PDF]
Water Land
[PDF]

Bowser's Inside Story
Staff Roll
[PDF]

Superstar Saga
Name is Fawful
[PDF]

KH2
Lazy Afternoons
[PDF]

Spirited Away
Sootballs
[PDF]

Nightmare before Christmas
End Title 1
[PDF]

[SlowPokemon]

Thank you, Spitllama!!! I really appreciate this!

[Nebbles]

ANIMAL CROSSING

[spitllama]

You're welcome, and

ANIMAL CROSSING

^This