SlowPokemon's Arrangements--NEW Ace Attorney (June 11)

[Bespinben]

SWEET! I'm definitely going to look at these!

[Nebbles]

Huh... the download of route 6 isn't working for me.

[SlowPokemon]

Hmm that's odd, it works for me... here I'll post the PDF Bloop made of it in a second.

Here - PDF

See if that works.

[Shadoninja]

His Name is Fawful

needs the game title under the song title.
I'd make it two measures per system but you couldn't do that in notepad.
otherwise it looks good.

Route 6

it's a bit odd that you would put a repeat on measure 2 instead of measure 1(i'm not counting the 2/4 pickup measure)
at measure 9 have you considered using F# instead of Gb?

also wouldn't it be gamefreak 2010? it was released in japan in 2010. it's a minor issue though.

Exploration team theme

needs moar in the bass.
at measure 5 and 11 is it necessary to have those dotted half notes?
measure 31 - that right hand part would be unnecessarily difficult to play accurately. have you considered removing the dotted halfs?  you're already playing C octaves in the bass.
measure 43 - I think that dotted half note would work better if it was in layer one with the F.
measure 52, 55 60 - are those tied notes necessary?

[SlowPokemon]

His Name is Fawful - yeah I realized that when I printed it out It also needs the title bolded.
Fixed MUS:
http://www.mediafire.com/?cuo54bjzuusura0

Route 6 - yeah, originally I had the two beginning notes as grace notes, so I couldn't repeat back to the first measure. I'll fix that. I guess I could change to F#, but I don't see the purpose, I think it doesn't look too bad as it is. And also, sorry about the copyright, I used the NOA release date. xD I don't think I'm going to change it though, as I did the same with my Route 4 and Musical Hall already on the site.
"Fixed" MUS:
http://www.mediafire.com/?pdhudczq13l1c0v

Exploration Team Theme - Yes, I really struggled with the bass. It's very repetitive, especially in that last section. I just don't know. Maybe I didn't put enough effort into it.
Measures 5 and 11, I tried it with the dotted quarter rest, but it just looked sloppy because they were virtually on top of the dotted half.
Good idea about measure 31, I'll just remove the top dotted half, leaving the C that's an octave lower, that's playable.
Measure 43, do you mean make it a dotted half in itself? Unless you do, I don't know how to make that in the same layer.
Measures 52, 55, 60, I suppose they're not necessary.
"Fixed" MUS:
http://www.mediafire.com/?pdhudczq13l1c0v

[SlowPokemon]

[NDS]Pokemon Black and White
Route 6
MUS

[NDS]Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Sky
Exploration Team Theme
MUS (Thanks for help with formatting everything, Shadoninja!)

[GBA]Mario and Luigi: Superstar Saga
His Name is Fawful
MUS

^There now it looks fancy

[Dudeman]

I've noticed several note errors. First of all, Measure 4: those last 2 notes should be an E natural and an F sharp. Measures 5-8: That whole section should be in G Major instead of Gb Major.

[Shadoninja]

exploration

5, 11 - what I mean is that since layer 1 is playing the same note as layer 2 you could take out the dotted half note completely.

31 - it'd only be playable if you had freakishly long fingers because you hold the C for 4 beats. there's two options here.
1)leave only the first C. that part is actually playable or
2)remove both C's

43 - I mean change the D dotted half to a dotted quarter and then put it with the F

[SlowPokemon]

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Time/Darkness/Sky
Apple Woods
MUS

Here ya go!

[Nebbles]

b'awww the link won't work ;A;

[SlowPokemon]

http://www.mediafire.com/?11nkg9cxa7vkl6m

^There?

[Nebbles]

Adobe can't open it :C

[SlowPokemon]

...that's because it's a MUS file. Download Finale Reader, there's a link on the main site.

[fingerz]

So, completed your own request before I got there, eh? I'll listen to this on the weekend and give you feedback!
I'll take it off my list too.

[Bespinben]

Apple Woods sounds great! It does feel somewhat "hollow" at times however, so maybe you could re-listen to OST to hear for any additional parts that might have been missed. Aside from that, it's great!