Olimar12345's Arrangements

[Olimar12345]

It sounds great except i have a couple of problems

1) The left hand should not sound so simple, maybe add a couple of notes to make a chord
2) at measure 36 the dynamic should be a mp or a mf to crescendo into a f or a ff in measure 37.

Otherwise i love it and i think its great and i'm printing it RIGHT NOW!

1) thats what frustrated me, see some parts in the recording have such a loud melody that the bass lines are almost drowned out, so it was harder to figure it out

2) i think its fine, it makes the fortissimo in 42 sound more powerful

[The Deku Trombonist]

I kinda have a couple of issues with the opening and some of the other bits later on but I only really took a good look at the opening. The rhythms are off in the first 3 bars (it should be in 4/4, not 7/8) ad some of the left hand chords are a bit weird. I can upload some of the corrections I made if you want. Pretty good overall though, it is quite a pain to transcribe .

[Meta-Ridley]

I like Sky Station but I think it sounded better in the trailer

[Bloop]

In some parts in sky station is the left hand louder then the right

[DrP]

In some parts in sky station is the left hand louder then the right

that's a finale problem... it sucks sometimes


and the 7/8 time was kind of strange, but if a 4/4 standard can be adapted, it would make it easier to play (because basically anything /8 is in a triplet feel rather then in straight 1 2 3 4)

[Olimar12345]

I kinda have a couple of issues with the opening and some of the other bits later on but I only really took a good look at the opening. The rhythms are off in the first 3 bars (it should be in 4/4, not 7/8) ad some of the left hand chords are a bit weird. I can upload some of the corrections I made if you want. Pretty good overall though, it is quite a pain to transcribe .

ok show me. im using 03 so i wont be able to edit it tho.


EDIT: ok, i cant figure out HOW 4/4 would work in the opening, i listened to it a million times and all 5 of us agree 7/8 works fine

[Olimar12345]

I like Sky Station but I think it sounded better in the trailer

i know

[Meta-Ridley]

Would you be able to do the trailer version? It's only the Beginning and the Coda/Finale that's different 

[Olimar12345]

i want to- i think i will

[The Deku Trombonist]

As I said earlier, I pretty much only looked at the first 8 bar intro and the counter melody in the subsequent 8 bars. Also, what you wrote in bar 8 isn't right, but I can't really be bothered to spend heaps of time trying work out what it's supposed to be either. I just wrote down the end result of some messing around.

http://www.mediafire.com/?igzdegzzrn2

As for the 7/8 vs 4/4 thing, try clicking your fingers (or a click track or whatever else) along to the beat of the orignal, 4/4 fits fine.

[Olimar12345]

ah i see wat u meant with the opening, i didnt know u meant to tie the note across the measure

as for the counter melody, what you've done collides with the left hand-its probably best to just leave out that Bb in some areas...

[The Deku Trombonist]

as for the counter melody, what you've done collides with the left hand-its probably best to just leave out that Bb in some areas...

Oops, I forgot to look for that . That means there'd also be at least one Bâ™® that collides with a left hand Cb somewhere.

And I think I forgot to mention that I also made quite a few changes to the left hand.

[Olimar12345]

super mario world ending replacement is complete. huzzah.

[Olimar12345]

updated the 1st post

[Taser9090]

Are there links to your arrangements?