[3DS] Mario & Luigi: Paper Jam - "Mountaintop Secrets" by DaBluePipe

Started by Zeta, September 01, 2024, 06:40:11 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Super Mario
Game: Mario & Luigi: Paper Jam
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Mountaintop Secrets
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: DaBluePipe


Latios212

who put corridors of time in my mario

Nice to see you submitting again! A few pointers:
- The arpeggios aren't quite right. For instance, beat 2 of measure 1 should be A instead of G. Try out a tool like AudioStretch to make sure you really have all the right notes.
- Do another check for playability.  Places like m. 12 and 20 are not playable by the right hand.
- Feel free to fill out the measures by extending note lengths instead of using rests.
- Use layers to represent different voices in the original if they occupy the same rhythmic space, and prioritize the main melody over the background voices that appear above it.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

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DaBluePipe

Wow it really does sound like Chrono Trigger  :o

I believe I corrected all of the arpeggios and extended out the chords. I also revoiced the melody at 13 to make it stand out better. It should also be playable now.