Rubikium's Aquatic Update Project Sheets

[Rubikium]

Paper Mario: The Origami King - Toad Town Port

[Latios212]

Yesss more Origami King

[cashwarrior1]

This seems like it'll be really fun to play! Just a small thing, in m26 the mandolin melody plays three quarter notes, C#-B-E

[Kricketune54]

What JasCas has pointed out as well as this:
• m42 RH beat three sounds like a 16th note figure: F#-G#-F#-E#
• m62 LH beat 2-3 sounds like the En's should be F#'s
• m63-m68 RH these plucked string 8th notes could be staccatoed

[Rubikium]

Files updated, thanks!

[Kricketune54]

• I think for the entirety of m1-10 every RH 8th note could be staccatoed.
• m11 Segno (return point symbol) - we typically look to have these centered over the barline (can raise it a bit), and the mp could also be moved to the left more, so the symbol's middle aligns with the noteheads above and below it
• m26 RH b3 hearing Dn
• m36 RH b3 hearing C# up an octave
• m43 RH the F# sounds like it's dotted quarter length, followed by a C# 8th length, and a C# on b3 that ties to an 8th length C# on m44 b1.
• m61 RH the Bn sounds to me like it starts on beat 2?
• m86 RH 3.5 hearing En above current An
• m94 LH Bb doesn't really fit on top of this C major chord, you could instead replace and add a Cn on top of current notes.

[Rubikium]

• m11 Segno (return point symbol) - we typically look to have these centered over the barline (can raise it a bit), and the mp could also be moved to the left more, so the symbol's middle aligns with the noteheads above and below it

I can't move the Segno symbol in Notepad. Please help me to move it later

• m26 RH b3 hearing Dn
• m36 RH b3 hearing C# up an octave

I'm not hearing these two, so I kept them as is for now

• m61 RH the Bn sounds to me like it starts on beat 2?

I hear it starts at beat 1 with a crescendo

• I think for the entirety of m1-10 every RH 8th note could be staccatoed.
• m43 RH the F# sounds like it's dotted quarter length, followed by a C# 8th length, and a C# on b3 that ties to an 8th length C# on m44 b1.
• m86 RH 3.5 hearing En above current An
• m94 LH Bb doesn't really fit on top of this C major chord, you could instead replace and add a Cn on top of current notes.

Fixed

[Kricketune54]

I can't move the Segno symbol in Notepad. Please help me to move it later

will do!

I'm not hearing these two, so I kept them as is for now

I'm hearing the Dn in m26 as part of the melody line, up an octave from top Dn in LH. As for m36 it sounds like the accordion goes up an octave.

I hear it starts at beat 1 with a crescendo

Oh yep, you're correct

• m43 RH the F# sounds like it's dotted quarter length, followed by a C# 8th length, and a C# on b3 that ties to an 8th length C# on m44 b1.

The C# is only an 8th note currently

• m16 LH beat 2-3 I heard G# and C# instead of Bn and D#
• m33 RH beat 2 sounds staccatoed
• m46 RH beat 1 I hear an An as well
• m46 LH I think the LH has a bit more pitches than necessary, maybe just Gn on beat and An on 2.5? Honestly they aren't really audible to me though so I'd be fine with just having the RH pitches here
• m63 and m67 LH I hear an An between the D's
• m77 RH not hearing these notes, I think the Bn and Bb on top in the LH are the top pitches.
• m78 RH beat 1 hearing top to bottom: Gn-Dn-Bn, and beat 2 An-En-C#.

[Rubikium]

I'm hearing the Dn in m26 as part of the melody line, up an octave from top Dn in LH. As for m36 it sounds like the accordion goes up an octave.

I see. Updated both

The C# is only an 8th note currently

Oops. Fixed

• m16 LH beat 2-3 I heard G# and C# instead of Bn and D#
• m33 RH beat 2 sounds staccatoed
• m46 RH beat 1 I hear an An as well
• m46 LH I think the LH has a bit more pitches than necessary, maybe just Gn on beat and An on 2.5? Honestly they aren't really audible to me though so I'd be fine with just having the RH pitches here
• m63 and m67 LH I hear an An between the D's
• m77 RH not hearing these notes, I think the Bn and Bb on top in the LH are the top pitches.
• m78 RH beat 1 hearing top to bottom: Gn-Dn-Bn, and beat 2 An-En-C#.

All changed. Thanks!

[Kricketune54]

Sorry for a bit of a gap, still a bit to go on this one, picked apart the LH a bit more

• m14 and m22 LH beats 2-3 this is a little too heavy with this many notes. I hear top to bottom, Bn-D# and F#-D# on the respective beats
• m23-24 LH can drop the Bn's on beat 2-3 not hearing them
• m25 LH beat 2-3 hearing An-F# and then Dn-F# (no An's on bottom)
• m26 LH beat 2-3 hearing Bn-G# but you could do G#-En, and then beat 3 hearing En-Bn-En (replace Dn on top)
• m45 LH it's hard to hear but the accordion does play the same type of pattern of the previous 4 measures. And you could then shift the LH part to its original octave in the RH?
• m49 and m52 LH hearing the held note restrike on beat 3
• m55 LH this beat is not entirely held, hearing movement/restrikes on beat 3
• m59-62 LH  beats 2-3 not hearing the middle notes of these note groups, hearing top and bottom
• m81 RH since it's not really going to be possible to hold you could write beat 1.0 into the current second layer but just as an 8th note

[Rubikium]

Updated the file with the changes, thanks!