Olimar12345's Aquatic Update Project Sheets

[Olimar12345]

Why not!

[GBA] - Metroid Fusion
Sector 4 (AQA) Underwater Area [MUSX]

[MUL] - Spiritfarer
Last Voyage [MUSX]

[Kricketune54]

Oh neat Spiritfarer!

[Bloop]

Last Voyage
Very neat, Spiritfarer! I haven't played the game myself, but just seeing bits and pieces from my ex playing already got me close to crying, it was a beautiful game.
I don't have much to say about the sheet though, just a few tiny things:
-m25 (and 26): I think I hear an A below the B in the R.H.: it at least sounds like there's more than just an F and a B
-m40: I only hear a dotted 8th E on beat 1 in the R.H., instead two separate E's
-The first page is quite crowded compared to the second page, maybe you could move the bottom system of page 1 to page 2 to get a 5 + 4 system distribution instead of 6 + 3?

[Olimar12345]

Hi Bloop! Thank you for looking it over! Good comments, I have made all of your recommended changes. Thank you!

[Bloop]

Awesome, then I'll approve Last Voyage!

[Bloop]

Double posting because I happened to also take a look at:

Sector 4
-This piece seems mostly be in Bb minor, though that mostly only becomes clear from m16 on. Thoughts on including a key signature there or for the whole piece?
-m12 beat 3.5 to m15: There seems to be a lower Bb here in the strings too. If the R.H. takes the top notes here, the L.H. can play that lower Bb.
-m44: The Bb in the R.H. on beat 2 is an octave higher in the original
-m47: I'm assuming you used the Bbb here in the R.H. for a Gbm chord, but maybe you could write it as an An too, as it's functionally similar to dropping to a leading tone?

[Olimar12345]

Double posting because I happened to also take a look at:

Sector 4
-This piece seems mostly be in Bb minor, though that mostly only becomes clear from m16 on. Thoughts on including a key signature there or for the whole piece?
-m12 beat 3.5 to m15: There seems to be a lower Bb here in the strings too. If the R.H. takes the top notes here, the L.H. can play that lower Bb.
-m44: The Bb in the R.H. on beat 2 is an octave higher in the original
-m47: I'm assuming you used the Bbb here in the R.H. for a Gbm chord, but maybe you could write it as an An too, as it's functionally similar to dropping to a leading tone?

Great suggestions, I've done them all. I added the key signature at 16. The file has been updated!

[Bloop]

Awesome! Maybe a cautionary accidental on the top Bb in m12 beat 3.5 would be nice, just to be sure? Either way I'll approve!

[Olimar12345]

Got it! I added in a couple!