ThatHiddenCharacter's Aquatic Update Project Sheets

[ThatHiddenCharacter]

For now I'm only going to put one here, but I may do a second one as well.

Cherry Lake - MUSX

[Latios212]

Just taking a peek, a couple passing comments:
- How would you feel about including the beat 2/5 hits in the m. 5-12 section where it makes sense to do so? I feel like that rhythm is pretty important to the sound here, and you could either write it in either the left or the right hand part, e.g. just another bass hit an octave up, in the left hand, or a harmony note or two in the right, without making this much more difficult.
- Having a Bbb chord in m. 37 is pretty weird, I would definitely recommend writing m. 37-38 using sharps instead - this would also make the transition from 38-39 smoother. m. 36 I think can stay as-is as a Db chord, although the walk down from Cb to An on the next page is kinda weird.

[ThatHiddenCharacter]

m. 36 I think can stay as-is as a Db chord,

I did actually change this as well because you're right about the Cb to An being weird. Especially taking the context of the entire descending line.

I've done the other changes as well. Plus a couple small things I noticed myself.

[Latios212]

I did actually change this as well because you're right about the Cb to An being weird. Especially taking the context of the entire descending line.

It's kind of weird for the right hand to be say F while the left hand says C# (this major third would make sense harmonically as C#-E# or Db-Fn) but it definitely makes more sense to read each hand independently this way, at least without any harmony written in.

Changes in m. 5+ look good as well! (Disclaimer, I haven't actually checked the sheet yet, was just commenting on stuff that stood out to me when I skimmed it)