Nine Lives' Aquatic Update Project Sheets

Started by NineLives, June 19, 2024, 12:50:23 PM

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NineLives

For this update, I've brought two ship-related themes.

DuckTales 2
"The Bermuda Triangle" | MUSX | Source

Mario Party
"The Wide, Wide Ocean" | MUSX | Source

Latios212

The Wide, Wide Ocean

Just peeking in here, nice to see more Mario Party! This isn't a full check but some things to help clean up readability a bit:

- This piece should be written in C major (blank keysig) - the tonic is unambiguous here.
- Respell any C flats as B naturals. TO keep intervals consistent in m. 24, you can use a D# instead of Eb. (Would need to think a bit more about whether to do the same in m. 8 since it's got a different countermelody)
- Use C# in the right hand of m. 8/24 as well to fit the A major chord.
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NineLives

I should have the above updated. If anything came up from the chromatic transpose, let me know.

Kricketune54

The Bermuda Triangle

• Sticking to the key/chords context, I think the sharp pitches in m10, 12, and 16 should be written as flats (ex. G# to Ab). I think that's my only comment though.

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