[MUL] Pikuniku - "The Artist's House" by Radiak488417

Started by Zeta, June 01, 2024, 03:40:58 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Pikuniku
Console: Multiplatform
Title: The Artist's House
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Radiak488417

Radiak488417


A bit unsure about the spelling in m14, suggestions appreciated.

Metamyrrh

What a little treat of a song to play :) Random comments on the LH: I don't hear the last note in m3 or m8, and beat 1 in m7 does not sound staccato to me.

Radiak488417

Good catch on all of those, removed the notes in m3 and m8 and added a tenuto to beat 1 in m7 to make it more obviously distinct. Thanks for checking!

XiaoMigros

m2 & m6 beat 3: I hear an Ab in the RH chords
m10: I hear additional Ebs at beats 1 and 2
m14: You should probably mess with the spacing somehow to avoid the accidentals stacking like that, maybe just the accidental tool will be enough?
m15: The slur here should attach to the note in the following measure
m16: I think the Ab should be G# (chromatics and stuff)

Radiak488417

Quote from: XiaoMigros on June 17, 2024, 12:13:10 PMm14: You should probably mess with the spacing somehow to avoid the accidentals stacking like that, maybe just the accidental tool will be enough?
m16: I think the Ab should be G# (chromatics and stuff)
Got everything except these, I agree with both but NotePad won't let me do either even if I re-import from Musescore. If you could fix these, and also add an invisible swing command and replace the pedal marks in the last system with working ones, I'd appreciate it.

XiaoMigros

Those have now been accounted for! Time to accept~

Zeta

This submission has been accepted by XiaoMigros.

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Bloop

I don't have much to add, but I noticed you don't have a dynamic marking at the start, maybe you could add a mp or something? That's all ^^

Radiak488417

Whoops, yeah I agree with mp. Unfortunately since Xiao saved the file in a newer version the articulations are messed up when I open the file with NotePad, so I can't export without manually readjusting all of them. Would you be willing to add it for me? :P

Bloop

No problem! I've updated the files and will accept for real now ^^

Zeta

This submission has been accepted by Bloop.

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