[NES] Dragon Buster - "Iwayama Dragon" by Jacopo Tore & Federico Mariane

Started by Zeta, May 17, 2024, 07:19:36 AM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Dragon Buster
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Iwayama Dragon
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arrangers: Jacopo Tore & Federico Mariane



Kricketune54

Sorry for a bit of a wait. This game's music is pretty similar huh?
• Can you make sure the tempo font is the same as the new template? Which can be found here, this also applies to "Catacomb"
• You could center the forte dynamic a little more, lowering it so it is centered between the staffs instead of closer to the upper staff

Just give those things a look, but I think that might do it for me otherwise


Kricketune54

There are some errors with your files, there's no midi (but two .mus), and there's a giant space on top of the PDF.


Kricketune54



Bloop

-The key signature should be Cm (3 flats). The Cm chord itself isn't as defined, but the chords spell out a clear andalusian cadence (Cm - Bb - Ab- G), as well as the G7 run at the end going back to Cm.
-Because of this, the G# at the end of m1 and m5 in the R.H. should be an Ab instead.

Everything else looks good tho!

Latios212

Two more quick things:
- The last four notes in the last measure are G-G#-A-B instead of G-A-A#-B
- The footer text is below the bottom margin (see this topic if you're not sure how to set it properly)You cannot view this attachment.
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Bloop

Quote from: Latios212 on July 13, 2024, 08:02:40 PM- The last four notes in the last measure are G-G#-A-B instead of G-A-A#-B
Quick addition to be sure, cuz of the key signature change this will be G - Ab - A natural - B natural


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