[NES] Batman: The Video Game - "Game Over" by Yug Guy

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Batman: The Video Game
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Game Over
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Yug Guy

[Yug_Guy]

This thread will now be used to talk about controversial Batman opinions. I'm sure the updaters will love it!

Here's the link to the transcription I did of this song that I used as a reference: https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fo/8il4m8i78sy93etlz9id1/h?rlkey=fst5xueox2cwb2lr0y7qyp4jc&dl=0

[Bloop]

This looks very nice, notes all look good! Just two things I wanted to mention:

-The game title and arranger text look like they're a bit far from the song title and composer text, maybe you could raise them a bit?
-Optionally, you could try imitating the drums with the bass pattern into something like this:
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So pretty much using the bass notes an octave lower than the original for bass drums, and fill the empty spaces where the snare hits are with a C an octave above. If you prefer keeping it true to the original square and triangle waves parts that's alright too though ^^

[Yug_Guy]

This looks very nice, notes all look good!

-The game title and arranger text look like they're a bit far from the song title and composer text, maybe you could raise them a bit?

Let me know if that's any better

-Optionally, you could try imitating the drums with the bass pattern into something like this:
You cannot view this attachment.
So pretty much using the bass notes an octave lower than the original for bass drums, and fill the empty spaces where the snare hits are with a C an octave above.

I thought about it, but I don't think I'm going to do this. I had thought about putting in a con pedale to match the reverb on the melody and alleviate some of the same issues you're getting at, but it didn't sound good when I tried it.

[Bloop]

Let me know if that's any better

It still looks kinda far apart: maybe compare with some of the screenshots in the formatting guidelines. I won't hold up my approval over it though :p

I thought about it, but I don't think I'm going to do this. I had thought about putting in a con pedale to match the reverb on the melody and alleviate some of the same issues you're getting at, but it didn't sound good when I tried it.

That's alright! Tbh I don't mind the pedal either haha, but I'll approve either way ^^

[Latios212]

This thread will now be used to talk about controversial Batman opinions. I'm sure the updaters will love it!

I have none to offer

Notes look good, nothing to add there! Before I accept, if you wouldn't mind, I'd suggest giving this topic a read and update this sheet (and whatever template you use) accordingly: [Text alignment and page margins]. Basically, the margins are a bit lopsided. Sorry to be nitpicky, but I think this should be a simple thing to clean up once and not worry about for future sheets too

[Yug_Guy]

All done!

[Latios212]

Aaaa sorry I had forgotten to point out the https :') sorry! I can update that for you if it's too much trouble

[Yug_Guy]

trouble

it really isn't

[Latios212]

Alrighty! Then it's accept time!

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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