[NES] Dragon Buster - "Limestone Cave" by Jacopo Tore & Federico Mariane

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JacopoTore

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May 21, 2024, 07:40:06 AM
Quote from: Kricketune54 on May 17, 2024, 08:05:51 PMThere are still portions of my comment not addressed.  Could you name the file like Dragon Buster Limestone Cave or something? Just would be easier for us when uploading.


Are you not hearing m1-3 RH beat 3 shorter? They sound staccato. Please see full comment.


Ok I did it!
I didn't understand, I apologize

Kricketune54

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May 25, 2024, 01:25:42 PM Last Edit: May 25, 2024, 01:29:37 PM by Kricketune54
Quote from: JacopoTore on May 21, 2024, 07:40:06 AMOk I did it!
I didn't understand, I apologize

No worries, though I should have clarified that m1-3 the rhythm length would then also be the same for m6-7 RH. Will give the approval on this, just update for the next updater.

XiaoMigros

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June 25, 2024, 03:44:04 AM
Looking good! A few small comments:
  • The PDF exported has a large gap at the top, could you fix the page size?
  • In the right hand, I think all the notes should be written as eighths. M4 beat 1, m5 beat 3, and beat 1 of m8, 10 and 12 would need to be adjusted

XiaoMigros

#21
July 04, 2024, 07:57:40 AM
Thanks! One last thing: The rest in m4 should be split into two eighth rests.

JacopoTore

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July 05, 2024, 04:27:46 AM
Quote from: XiaoMigros on July 04, 2024, 07:57:40 AMThanks! One last thing: The rest in m4 should be split into two eighth rests.

Ok I did it

Zeta

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July 05, 2024, 12:44:13 PM
This submission has been accepted by XiaoMigros.

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