[NES] Shadowgate - "Subterranean Cavern" by Atcero

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Shadowgate
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Subterranean Cavern
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Atcero

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[Atcero]

Also seen the name as Subterranean Lake and just Cavern, so if the name needs to change I have no problems doing that. This name I know however comes from when you first walk into the room and its described as a Subterranean Cavern.

[Latios212]

Notes look good! A few things:
- The RH notes in m. 2 and 6 should last until the end of the next measure (whole note tied to whole note).
- Use E# instead of Fn in m. 1/4/8, so you don't have to keep alternating accidentals on the F.
- Similarly, the G# grace note sin m. 10 and 15 would be better off as Ab.
- Not strictly required, but I typically recommend slurring grace notes to the melody notes that they follow so they're not just floating in space.

I'll defer to you on naming since I don't know anything about the game. Sounds good

Also I'm not really sure about the key signature, someone else can comment on that, but it seems fine to me from a reading perspective

[Atcero]

All updated, thank you!

[Latios212]

Looks good, except you used ties instead of slurs for the grace notes (use the Smart Shape Tool)

[Atcero]

Oh jeez youre right, got that fixed!

[Latios212]

The mf could be moved left and down a bit to be centered between the staves under beat 1.

That's all I've got though so I will approve

[Libera]

Looks good!

The only comment I have is that I'd suggest moving all of the systems down a little bit so you have a little more space at the top of the sheet (there's plenty of room at the bottom to do this).

[Atcero]

Moved em down, thank ya! Also looks like I forgot to set the distance from 1.03" to 1" so I also did that.

[Libera]

Also looks like I forgot to set the distance from 1.03" to 1" so I also did that.

Oh good, sorry I missed that.

Moved em down, thank ya!

Hmm they still look pretty similar to what I remember, both what I and Latios suggested.  I think we were thinking something more like:

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Here I've just centred the dynamic on beat 1 between the staves and moved all four systems equally down a little bit (look for the distance between the fourth bar and the arranger info).  Does that make sense?

[Atcero]

Yes it does, hopefully its good to go now. Thank you!

[Libera]

Yep, that looks better!  I'll accept then.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Libera.

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