[PC] Deltarune - "Berdly" by mastersuperfan

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Submission Information:
Series: Undertale
Game: Deltarune
Console: PC
Title: Berdly
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mastersuperfan

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[mastersuperfan]

[Bloop]

ah yes, i can see you're a real gamer
There's not that much to say on this one! I coincidentally arranged this too, so there's just two suggestions I could make:

-m15-18: Instead of a first and second ending, you could do a mid measure repeat too to save a bit of ink (screenshot from my arrangement):
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-m22: Maybe you could do a clef change in the L.H. for this note, as the jump up to the B is abrupt. You could possibly do this in m29-30 too for the B or from the F#, but it's a smaller jump up this time.

[mastersuperfan]

ah yes, i can see you're a real gamer

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-m15-18: Instead of a first and second ending, you could do a mid measure repeat too to save a bit of ink (screenshot from my arrangement):
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NGL, this image confused me for a few seconds when I tried to read it. I think I'll keep it as is unless others feel strongly, since I've never seen this before and I think it could be potentially confusing (to me, it looks like it's separated into two different measures when it's really not).

-m22: Maybe you could do a clef change in the L.H. for this note, as the jump up to the B is abrupt. You could possibly do this in m29-30 too for the B or from the F#, but it's a smaller jump up this time.

Makes sense, I did clef changes for m22 and m30.

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[Bloop]

Makes sense, I haven't seen it that much either anyway. Clef changes look good, so I'll approve now!
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[Latios212]

I too prefer reading the repeat sections as full bars particularly for simpler pieces like this.

Nothing further to add, accepting!

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This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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