*{NEW USER}* lxf's piano arrangements *{WOW}*

Started by lxf, July 16, 2021, 01:56:26 PM

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Looking at the T-Fanger battle quickly. While I'm not able to fully check the notes, it looks pretty solid at first glance. The main issues I see with it now are twofold. The first is the formatting. I don't understand why the segno is so large in measure 6, nor why the DS marking is similarly massive. A number of the slurs are poorly placed, but that might just be musescores's fault. Additionally, I can't seem to make heads or tails of anything in the finale measure; neither notes nor performance directions (nor fish). The second major issue is playability. The 16th runs are barely playable at q=180 in the first place. Putting them alongside a second layer makes them straight-up impossible for all but the virtuosos to play, and they're likely not spending their time with video game music. Might I suggest either removing that voice entirely or changing the 16ths to a simplified 8th countermelody?