[SW] Paper Mario: The Origami King - "Tranquil Pipes Teahouse" by mastersuperfan

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Submission Information:
Series: Paper Mario
Game: Paper Mario: The Origami King
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: Tranquil Pipes Teahouse
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: mastersuperfan

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[mastersuperfan]

[Latios212]

This has gotta be one of the neatest musical easter eggs in recent memory... and this couldn't translate to piano more easily. A very pleasant sight read as well

Just a few small things:
- m. 14 RH is different than m. 10 RH
- Don't think you need that pedal marking at the end? With it there it kinda looks like you might be implying that the pedal should be held down throughout the entire piece.
- You could play with the second layer in the last measure and bring some things back to normal height/flippage if you want:

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[mastersuperfan]

- m. 14 RH is different than m. 10 RH

Oops, fixed.

- Don't think you need that pedal marking at the end? With it there it kinda looks like you might be implying that the pedal should be held down throughout the entire piece.

I wanted to explicitly indicate that the pedal should be released on beat 4 of the last measure, but I can see how that might be confusing. I removed it.

- You could play with the second layer in the last measure and bring some things back to normal height/flippage if you want:

I didn't really like the look of this, so I just left it as is.

Thanks for taking a look!

[Latios212]

Cool looks good last thing I forgot to mention last time is Intelligent Systems should be in the copyright too.

[Sebastian]

Couple things:

- You forgot a dynamic marking : )
- Perhaps a courtesy accidental on the C (RH; M. 2). Totally up to you though. I know people can be picky about these in their sheets.

Anyway, looking great! Definitely adding this to my notebook. : )

This has gotta be one of the neatest musical easter eggs in recent memory... and this couldn't translate to piano more easily. A very pleasant sight read as well

I second this!

[mastersuperfan]

last thing I forgot to mention last time is Intelligent Systems should be in the copyright too.

added

- You forgot a dynamic marking : )

oops

- Perhaps a courtesy accidental on the C (RH; M. 2). Totally up to you though. I know people can be picky about these in their sheets.

I thought about this and then decided against it because there are several other similar spots and I didn't want to clutter up the sheet too much.

Files updated; thanks for taking a look!

[Latios212]

- Perhaps a courtesy accidental on the C (RH; M. 2). Totally up to you though. I know people can be picky about these in their sheets.

I thought about this and then decided against it because there are several other similar spots and I didn't want to clutter up the sheet too much.

Agreed with MSF here; just about every other measure alternates Cb and Cn for most of the piece and I don't think it's confusing enough anywhere to be easily misread, having sight read through this one a bunch of times.

Reiterating my approval here

[Sebastian]

Sweet, and same here.

Looking good!

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This submission has been accepted by Sebastian.

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