[MUL] Sonic the Hedgehog (Game Gear/Master System) - "Bridge Zone" by LeviR.star

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Submission Information:
Series: Sonic
Game: Sonic the Hedgehog (Game Gear/Master System)
Console: Multiplatform
Title: Bridge Zone
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: LeviR.star

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[LeviR.star]

[Libera]

Looks great, some small things:

-Be careful with the slurs hitting the accidentals (bar 9, bar 13 is a little close also).
-Beats 2.5-3 in bar 12 and 14 sound like echoes to me; had you considered notating that in?

[Maelstrom]

^What libera said. That's all I can find though, fix that and I'll approve or accept, depending on if libera responds first or not

[LeviR.star]

Looks great, some small things:

-Be careful with the slurs hitting the accidentals (bar 9, bar 13 is a little close also).
-Beats 2.5-3 in bar 12 and 14 sound like echoes to me; had you considered notating that in?

^What libera said. That's all I can find though, fix that and I'll approve or accept, depending on if libera responds first or not

- I adjusted the slurs so that the accidentals aren't touching/almost touching anymore
- listening to the melody a little more closely, I found that I had notated some of the echoes as main line, so I got rid of them. No echo notes remain

Files are now updated.

[Maelstrom]

Cool, I approve for real this time

[Libera]

Great, accepting...

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Libera.

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