[NES] StarTropics - "Dungeon" by stellarlights24

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: StarTropics
Console: Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Dungeon
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: stellarlights24

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[JacopoTore]

[Latios212]

For reference, a shorter video is nice

This is great! Rhythm, notes, everything is all in place. Just have two things to bring up.

1 - Duration/articulations on the notes. What you have right now has a tendency to "fill in" space by extending note durations where the original piece has rests. Not a big deal with the left hand accompaniment, but for the right hand it makes a notable difference in how the melody is articulated.

So measure 1 should look something like this (different part highlighted)...
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and m. 5-6 like this (check the rest of the piece for similar parts).
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2 - Text and page margins should be consistent - see this topic

[stellarlights24]

I edited this with the changes based on your suggestions including the rhythm and the page margins!!

[Latios212]

Cool, looks great now! Just a last couple of things - it looks like the page number on the second page is still too high, and the D.C. is missing a second period after the C.

Once that's done, I looks good to me~

[stellarlights24]

Alright, changes are done!

[Latios212]

Awesome, thanks for the quick update (You can move the music down on page 2 a bit to give the header more room; there's lots of space on the lower portion of the page.)

[stellarlights24]

I lowered it just a little. Does it look good?

[Latios212]

Yep ^^

[Maelstrom]

Numbers in the time sig are bolded and shouldn't be. The numbers were actually written in the text font, not the number font so it was super easy to fix

Everything else looks great so I'll just fix that and accept it

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Maelstrom.

~Zeta, your friendly NSM-Bot