[SWITCH] Pokémon Sword & Pokémon Shield - "Battle! (Calyrex)" by Kricketune54

[Kricketune54]

- I think I hear some chord motion here in the 2nd layer between the measures but I can't pinpoint what's moving so I guess you aren't forced to change it. Thought I'd mention it though.

I think the B moves to a E and the G# goes to an A.  Problem with moving to an A is it's unplayable at original octave because of the distance.  That's why I had the C# at the bottom of voice 2 on beat 4 because that's at least present in the original octave.  That is also why beat 3 in the second voice of m29 the half notes moved to C# and A nat.

Do you think the phrase would sound better chord wise like this? 



Additionally, I have two asks about m30 in the RH. I wanted to know if I should add D# to that chord to add to it.  Additionally, do you hear a A# at the bottom of the chord as opposed to the G# at m30?  I have gone back and forth on that since starting this arrangement.

One other request I had is in the format: I would like to change the half notes in m20-28 RH to whole notes so that they are accurate to the song.  Would it be okay when I resubmit this that you hide the half rests?  I can't get rid of them in Notepad.

[Maelstrom]

First of all, I like those chords better. What I was referring to specifically was movement from b4 of m28 to b1 of m29. Can't put my finger on it still.

This is what I hear in m30, unsimplified. Do with this what you will

I hear no A#s here.

One other request I had is in the format: I would like to change the half notes in m20-28 RH to whole notes so that they are accurate to the song.  Would it be okay when I resubmit this that you hide the half rests?  I can't get rid of them in Notepad.

sure thing

[Kricketune54]

First of all, I like those chords better. What I was referring to specifically was movement from b4 of m28 to b1 of m29. Can't put my finger on it still.

This is what I hear in m30, unsimplified. Do with this what you will

I hear no A#s here.
sure thing

I played around with the chords a little more at m 28-29, and here is what I have put now (measure 32 labeled, standing in for m. 28).  I also simplified what you had at m.30, removing the E#.



In my previous comment, I had meant m.31, not m.30 with regards to A#.  I have made a couple changes to the m.31 chord.

New files uploaded, with a couple additional LH rhythms on the second page as well as a small addition in RH on the last measure of the song

[Maelstrom]

Yeah, that looks good. Great work, glad I was able to help.

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