[SNES] EarthBound - "Apple Kid's Theme" by Yug Guy

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Submission Information:
Series: EarthBound
Game: EarthBound
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Apple Kid's Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Yug Guy

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[Yug_Guy]

One of these days I need to go back & fix the composer info on my earlier EarthBound sheets to match official sources...

[mastersuperfan]

- Regarding the composer info: I'm always an advocate for the Oxford comma.
- I would suggest a courtesy natural on the Bn in m13 RH since the LH plays Bb on beat 1.
- I would beam the first four beats of the last measure like 4/4 (i.e. beam the LH notes together in groups of four).

Everything else looks nice.

[Yug_Guy]

- Regarding the composer info: I'm always an advocate for the Oxford comma.

Normally, I advocate for the Oxford comma, but I don't think it's really necessary in this case.

The other stuff is fixed.

[mastersuperfan]

Nice, approved

[Static]

- Because this is in swing, offbeat 8th notes should be aligned with the 3rd note in triplets; m8 is not currently aligned properly.
- m13 beat 1 LH would be better as just a staccato quarter note, it lines up nicely with the RH (feel free to adjust spacing as necessary).
- The melody in m10-17 should be a mostly staccato, right now you have it written the same as m1-8.
- Both the title and the copyright info are not within the page margins.

[Yug_Guy]

- Because this is in swing, offbeat 8th notes should be aligned with the 3rd note in triplets; m8 is not currently aligned properly.

Not sure how to do this in Finale, but I do agree on the principle.

Everything else should be fixed.

[Static]

Not sure how to do this in Finale, but I do agree on the principle.

Go to "Special Tools" and click on "Note Position Tool" (it looks like a note with some arrows around it), then click on the handle by the note to move it horizontally.

The other changes look good, except for the m13 thing; I meant m12 LH, sorry about that

[Yug_Guy]

Well, it doesn't look super pretty, but it is aligned.

[Static]

You can decrease the space of the empty 3/4 measure if you want, but honestly I think it looks fine as it is. The only thing I have to say is the m12 thing; it looks the same as it did before.

[Yug_Guy]

The only thing I have to say is the m12 thing; it looks the same as it did before.

You never mentioned m12 - I added a staccato to m13 LH beat one if that's what you're referring to?

[Static]

The other changes look good, except for the m13 thing; I meant m12 LH, sorry about that

Sorry about the confusion here; you can remove the one in m13.

[Yug_Guy]

- m13 beat 1 LH would be better as just a staccato quarter note, it lines up nicely with the RH (feel free to adjust spacing as necessary).

The other changes look good, except for the m13 thing; I meant m12 LH, sorry about that

m12 LH doesn't have a note on beat 1...

[Static]

m12 LH doesn't have a note on beat 1...

aaa you're right I can't read

I'm dumb

m13 beat 1 LH is an 8th note; It would look nicer as a staccato quarter note to match the RH. That's what I meant originally. Hopefully that makes sense now.
I apologize for all that, I should be able to read...

[Yug_Guy]

Reading is hard, you know?

Fixed.