[GCN] Mario Party 4 - "Fortune's Turn" by cacabish

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Mario Party
Game: Mario Party 4
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Fortune's Turn
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: cacabish

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[cacabish]

Yeah, your left hand is never gonna get tired.

[Static]

• If you don't want to beam across things like m1 RH, then you should split places like m2 beats 3-4. 1+2 8th notes instead of 3 together (or 2+1 like in m17). It just makes things more visually consistent.
• m2 beat 3 LH: Beam across this beat. I'd also consider using a staccato 8th note on beat 3.25 instead of 16th note + rest. It reduces clutter.
• Beat 4.5 of m13 and 15 doesn't really sound any longer to me than any of the other 8th notes, maybe put staccatos on them.
• I would move all the systems down just a bit since there's a bit more space on the bottom, and then move the composer/arranger info down so it's not vertically overlapping with the title.
• Tempo marking should be aligned with the left side of the time signature.

[cacabish]

If you don't want to beam across things like m1 RH, then you should split places like m2 beats 3-4. 1+2 8th notes instead of 3 together (or 2+1 like in m17). It just makes things more visually consistent.

I'm not sure if this also applies to measures m.13 and m.15 at beat 3.5 (with the three eighth notes). I don't think so, but I could be wrong.

Aside from that issue, I've implemented all of Static's suggestions and updated the files accordingly.

[Static]

I'm not sure if this also applies to measures m.13 and m.15 at beat 3.5 (with the three eighth notes). I don't think so, but I could be wrong.

Yeah, it does. Other than that, everything else looks great.

[Latios212]

Also to beats 1.5-2 in m. 14/16 LH

[cacabish]

Alright, methinks I got them all. The files have been updated according to your guys' suggestions.
Let me know if there's anything else!

[Latios212]

looks gooood

[Static]

One last thing, Hudson Soft should be listed in the copyright info with Nintendo since they developed the game.

[cacabish]

One last thing, Hudson Soft should be listed in the copyright info with Nintendo since they developed the game.

Good catch! I had forgotten about that.

It should be fixed now -- I've added them to the footer text and the score metadata and updated the submission files.

[Static]

Looks great

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Static.

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