[MUL] Night in the Woods - "MaeBea" by BrainyLucario

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Night in the Woods
Console: Multiplatform
Title: MaeBea
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: BrainyLucario

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[BrainyLucario]

The pdf might be screwed up as well as the mus since when i transferred it it kinda messed it up.

[Bespinben]

The left hand has missing parts. These would be the correct notes (adjusting for overlapping notes and hand reach):

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The rhythm of the bell line is correct, but it is oddly notated. "Showing beat 3" is a side-effect Two-Level Rhythmic Parsing Rule; whole notes and on-beat half notes can cross the middle of the bar. It should be notated like this:

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On the arranging side, the arrangement feels a bit empty. In the OST, the shimmery organ chords in the background help to fill in the gaps between the bass guitars and the bells. You could emulate this by adding harmonies.

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[BrainyLucario]

Notepad issues prevent the changes to measure 5 and stuff but everything else is updated

[Bespinben]

Nice! Few fixes:

*Upper bass voice in m.8 beat 4 should be "D" instead of "E"
*Upper bass voice in m.11 beat 4 should be "C" instead of "D"

*M.9-12 could also benefit from harmonization:
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[BrainyLucario]

BrainyLucario: Who wants to fix sheets at 3 in the morning?

Bespinben: Oh boy 3 AM!

Fixed

[Bespinben]

#3amSquad
~Le approve~

I've updated the files with the non-Notepad-achievable edits, and also optimized the layout.

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[Latios212]

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Also I'd personally separate layers in 10/12... but definitely fine as is. Once that typo's fixed I'll accept

[Bespinben]

Typo fixed 

[Latios212]

wheehee

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This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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