Food/Cooking Update

[Latios212]

-[WiiU] New Super Mario Bros. U - "Acorn Plains

Looks good! Just a couple small things.
- I recommend against condensing beats 1.5-2 and 3.5-4 into quarter rests in the LH (in m. 5 and such) as they obscure the downbeat and make reading along with the RH a bit harder.
- I don't think the bass plays on beat 3.5 in m. 13/15.

- [GB] The Final Fantasy Legend - "Eat the Meat"

Got a link to the (non-extended) original? This one I found is labeled under a different game

[LeviR.star]

Got a link to the (non-extended) original? This one I found is labeled under a different game

Yea sure, it's the "Victory" theme: Final Fantasy Legend, The (GB) Music - Victory Theme 01

Will get to the feedback from Latios shortly.

[LeviR.star]

Looks good! Just a couple small things.
- I recommend against condensing beats 1.5-2 and 3.5-4 into quarter rests in the LH (in m. 5 and such) as they obscure the downbeat and make reading along with the RH a bit harder.
- I don't think the bass plays on beat 3.5 in m. 13/15.

- you got it. I wish Finale wouldn't do that under swing feel by default...
- you're right, it doesn't. Took those notes out

[Latios212]

Got a few of mine ready! Added the following to the Dropbox folder:

• [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Gourmet Race"
• [NDS] Kirby Mass Attack - "Fun Castle" < Static reminded me that the castle is made out of food haha
• [SWITCH] Fire Emblem: Three Houses - "Teatime Joy"
• [SWITCH] Super Mario Odyssey - "Peronza Plaza"

Plus a new sheet!

• [WiiU] Yoshi's Woolly World - "Yoshi and Cookies"

- you got it. I wish Finale wouldn't do that under swing feel by default...
- you're right, it doesn't. Took those notes out

You missed m. 21, but I fixed it for you. Approved!

[LeviR.star]

Added three new sheets tonight. Some notes for the updaters, in case they ask:

1. [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Dreaming of Food"

A pretty straight-forward tune; only had to make a small rhythm sacrifice in the LH. The last chord is a little more dissonant than I remember.

2. [N64] Kirby 64: The Crystal Shards - "Goal Game"

I'm hearing 8th note movement in both hands, but I decided to simplify the lower voice for the purpose of playing. Hope it's right.

3. [GBA] Kirby & The Amazing Mirror - "Radish Ruins"

Kirby Wiki Discord says it's okay to use this title, even if the tune isn't entirely exclusive to the Radish Ruins area. I can't decipher what's going on in the percussion very well, so I made the A-flat octave triplet in the LH a recurring pattern. Don't know if that's the best way to go, so I'm open to anyone's ideas.

Only three more to go. Thanks, updaters!

[Static]

Fair enough. I think I'll call dibs on "Sweet Sweet Canyon" from Mario Kart 8 instead before someone else does.

Alright, we'll use my arrangement then. I've added it to the folder.

[McDucky]

Fish is indeed a food

Yeah, but "Fishy" is just what one person translated it as. The official title has nothing to do with fish, it just means "dubious" or "suspicious", so it feels very arbitrary.
Not that I wouldn't love to have it on the site

[Rubikium]

Sheet for the update:
[Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "World 3: Treat Land" FILES Original

Also, I am going to arrange the followings tunes:
[GBA] Kirby & The Amazing Mirror - "Olive Ocean"
[WiiU] New Super Mario Bros. U - "Meringue Clouds"

[Static]

Added Levi's additional sheets and Rubikium's to the folder and OP (converted to xml to mus and fixed some formatting stuff).

[Latios212]

Getting a head start on some feedback!

[Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "World 3: Treat Land" FILES Original

Looks pretty solid! A few initial thoughts:
- There should be something signaling the introduction of the melody in beat 3 of measure 4. One thing I'd suggest is using a p dynamic at the beginning and having the rest of the song be mp/mf from there.
- Measures 8 and 16 beat 3 should have an A# in the right hand, layer 2.
- Measure 21+ would be better as arpeggios of single notes in the left hand instead of trying to combine multiple layers and having some releating notes
More to come later! Also, be sure to make the changes to the Finale file that Static uploaded to the Dropbox folder, as that contains a couple of formatting fixes like the header.

Pokémon Stadium [N64]

"Sushi-Go-Round"

MUS

MUSX

MIDI

PDF

Original

Looks good, just two things:
- Pager footer is outside the margin
- Beats 1.5 and 3.5 in the original sound just like the other notes to me, not sure why you have them notated like that?

• [SNES] Super Mario Kart - "Choco Island" (Replacement)

Really great work. Just a few small things from me:
- This could look definitely a little nicer if you reduced the space between LH/RH to add more space between systems, particularly on page 2
- The "tap pen/pencil" marking might make a bit more sense at m. 38 where there are actually notes on the bottom staff. Maybe...
- Maybe a mf dynamic for the percussion? (i.e. not staying at f for the rest of the song)

• [SNES] Super Mario RPG: Legend of the Seven Stars - "Let's Go Down the Wine River" (Replacement)

Looks awesome. I'd just suggest adjusting the slurs in m. 20 and 28 a bit since they look a bit awkward sloping down from the notehead to the note stem even though the notes are ascending.

1. [SNES] Kirby Super Star - "Dreaming of Food"

A pretty straight-forward tune; only had to make a small rhythm sacrifice in the LH. The last chord is a little more dissonant than I remember.

I think I'm hearing a G instead of a C in the last chord. Other than that, looks great.

[Radiak488417]

I'd like to claim Apple Woods (replacement) from PMD Explorers, if that's alright.

[Rubikium]

- There should be something signaling the introduction of the melody in beat 3 of measure 4. One thing I'd suggest is using a p dynamic at the beginning and having the rest of the song be mp/mf from there.

Changed. Also modified measure 49-52 to match the beginning.
 

- Measures 8 and 16 beat 3 should have an A# in the right hand, layer 2.

Added.
 

- Measure 21+ would be better as arpeggios of single notes in the left hand instead of trying to combine multiple layers and having some releating notes

I have changed measure 21-28. Measure 29-48 seems fine, but if it needs additional changes, I could fix them.

Link to updated files (ver02)

[NineLives]

All right. Here's the first draft!

Mario Kart 8 - "Sweet Sweet Canyon" PDF | MIDI | MUS | MUSX | Source

[mikey]

Fish is indeed a food

FISH ARE FRIENDS

[LeviR.star]

I think I'm hearing a G instead of a C in the last chord. Other than that, looks great.

I went back and listened, and it turns out there is indeed a G4 in that last chord. Deleted the C and put a G in between that E-flat - B-flat perfect fifth. Updated the file, too.

Also, you can go ahead and update the YouTube link for this one in the OP:

Yea sure, it's the "Victory" theme: Final Fantasy Legend, The (GB) Music - Victory Theme 01