[SWITCH] Fire Emblem: Three Houses - "A Place to Rest" by Libera

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Submission Information:
Series: Fire Emblem
Game: Fire Emblem: Three Houses
Console: Nintendo Switch
Title: A Place to Rest
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Libera

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[Libera]

A Sheet to Submit.

[Latios212]

;-; pretty song

Really don't have a lot to say about this one - it looks and sounds great. Just a few small things
- It might be simpler to just combine the lower layers in m. 22-23
- I'm hearing the chord on beat 1 of m. 23/25 inverted down once
- I think it would make sense to put the middle C in m. 24 in the lower layer instead of the upper layer?
- Adjust the top tie in m. 32 so it doesn't blend in with the ledger line
- The bass re-strikes F in m. 44.
- Roll chord in m. 45?

[Libera]

;-; pretty song

Really don't have a lot to say about this one - it looks and sounds great.

Correct, and thanks!  New files are up now.

- It might be simpler to just combine the lower layers in m. 22-23
- I think it would make sense to put the middle C in m. 24 in the lower layer instead of the upper layer?

Yeah for both of these I've now just combined the layers.

- I'm hearing the chord on beat 1 of m. 23/25 inverted down once

Hmm, I'm still hearing this as an A at the top of the chord.  The F is louder though, but the A comes up clearly on top to me.

- Adjust the top tie in m. 32 so it doesn't blend in with the ledger line
- The bass re-strikes F in m. 44.
- Roll chord in m. 45?

All fixed, hopefully.

[Latios212]

Nice!

- It might be simpler to just combine the lower layers in m. 22-23

I think my intention for this was so that you could flip the dotted half notes down and not have the stems conflict. How does that sound to you? (I haven't tried it yet.)

- I'm hearing the chord on beat 1 of m. 23/25 inverted down once

Hm, could be just the fact that the A is repeated or sustained that's throwing one of us off. I'll leave someone else to comment on that if they want. I'm fine with keeping it for now.

Everything else looks good!

[Libera]

I think my intention for this was so that you could flip the dotted half notes down and not have the stems conflict. How does that sound to you? (I haven't tried it yet.)

That's probably a better idea and I've fixed it in the meantime.

[Latios212]

Great! Looks good to me

[Static]

Unexpectedly jazzy...

- m15, 34 sounds like it's missing an En right below the F.
- m25-27 is missing a Bb in the RH.

Otherwise, looks great!

[Libera]

Fixed both of those things.  Also, on looking at bars 25-27 again I'm not really sure why it's written differently the second time, so I changed it to make it more consistent.

Thanks for the help!

[Static]

Looks good to me

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