[SNES] Super Mario RPG: Legend of the Seven Stars - "Dodo's Coming!!" (Replacement) by ThatHiddenCha

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario RPG: Legend of the Seven Stars
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Dodo's Coming!!
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: ThatHiddenCharacter


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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[ThatHiddenCharacter]

How do we change the name of a replacement submission? It's supposed to be called "Dodo's Coming!!".

[Libera]

How do we change the name of a replacement submission? It's supposed to be called "Dodo's Coming!!".

By letting us know and then one of the updaters can change it, which I have now done.  Thanks!

[Static]

Hey, I remember looking over this a long time ago! So, I've looked at it again:

• I really don't have anything to say note-wise, everything checks out. The only thing I would change would be to move the D on beat 3 (3rd 8th note beat) to the LH. I think it feels just a bit more natural to play it like that since the LH is already going up toward that D later in the measure.
• Add Square to the copyright info next to Nintendo.
• m34 RH: Add a slur on the other side of the other side of grace notes leading to the A natural.
• For the last 4 systems, I would distribute the measures 3-3-4-3. I think this provides the most even spacing for the music.

Really great sheet you got here.

[ThatHiddenCharacter]

Alrighty. The file's have been updated.

[Static]

Looks great, I approve.

[Latios212]

Great sheet, thanks for the replacement! Just a few last comments from me.
- When using clef changes, introduce them at the start of the phrase where notes are in the new clef, and not before rests. This applies to m. 28 and 33-35.
- Page 1 footer and page 2 header are outside the margins.
- Cresc. in m. 28 is extremely close to the notes. We could make more space by flipping the right hand part.

Here's a file with the edits for you to use.

[ThatHiddenCharacter]

Thanks for the file. I've updated the submission files.

[Latios212]

No problem! All good to go, accepting now.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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