[3DS] Monster Hunter Generations - "Meownster Hunters, Fire Away!" by Th3Gavst3r

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Monster Hunter Generations
Console: Nintendo 3DS
Title: Meownster Hunters, Fire Away!
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Th3Gavst3r

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[Th3Gavst3r]

[Libera]

This reminds me how badly we need the credits version on site.

[Th3Gavst3r]

Every iteration of this theme is on my to-do list :P

[Libera]

Checking it now!

-At the end of bars 22 and 26 I'm hearing more C -> F rather than A -> F in the bass movement.
-Some of the staccato placement in the first system is a bit uneven, so it's probably worth tidying up a bit.

Other than those small things, it looks great!  Nice work, and I look forward to seeing the credits version if you ever do it!

[Latios212]

Don't have much to add here ^^ I'd prefer if the beam was broken in the left hand of m. 20, but that's up to you.

Once the comments are addressed this has my seal of approval

[Th3Gavst3r]

-At the end of bars 22 and 26 I'm hearing more C -> F rather than A -> F in the bass movement.

I changed m.22 to another chromatic approach like m.24 to make things simple.

-Some of the staccato placement in the first system is a bit uneven, so it's probably worth tidying up a bit.

The staccatos were aligned to the center of the note before, but I moved them over to make them look subjectively better.

Don't have much to add here ^^ I'd prefer if the beam was broken in the left hand of m. 20, but that's up to you.

Having a bunch of disconnected eighth notes/eighth rests make it really hard for me to keep track of where the beats are, so I prefer keeping the beaming in.

[Libera]

Awesome.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Libera.

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