[GCN] Pokémon Colosseum - "Pyrite Town" (Replacement) by Latios212

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Colosseum
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Pyrite Town
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Latios212


Replacement Information:
Links to Existing Sheet: MUS | MIDI | PDF
Replacement Type: Challenge (new arranger)

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[Latios212]

One of those random on the spur of the moment arrangements

Oops, forgot to remove the octave clef, will do tomorrow

[Libera]

I remember this piece!  I never got very far in this game when I was younger and I'd completely forgotten about it until I listened to it just now.

-Watch the ties in bars 24-28.  I think a lot of them could do with adjusting, but particularly layer two dyads/chords in bar 24 and 26.  Just in general they look quite messy at the moment is my thinking.
-Accents on the last chord in bar 14 and bar 16?  Also the ties on the lowest notes in those chords need adjusting I think.
-You've already mentioned it but yeah the octave clef should be changed.

Notes look good to me, nice job!  (And thanks for reminding me about this game haha.)

[Latios212]

Haha thanks and no problem

I've changed the clef and made a few minor adjustments to the ties, but I don't think the notes in 14/16 warrant accents.

[Libera]

Alrighty, looks good to me.

[Static]

My first thought upon listening was Sunshade lol

Some things:

• m14, 16 RH beat 3.5: I feel like this chord is missing some of the color of the original; I think there should be an E natural (maybe put it in the LH above the G). It looks like throughout the sheet you're trying to be consistent kinda with what voices you're using, but if there's a note that makes a chord (especially a held one) more interesting, I think that note should probably be included.
• m20, 22 LH: You beam across beats 1 and 2 here, but nowhere else.

Neat sheet.

[Latios212]

My first thought upon listening was Sunshade lol

Haha yeah that opening bass riff is similar!

I updated the sheet as per your comments. The beaming in measures 20/22 was a mistake, and for measures 14/16 I had originally not liked the sound of the major second between the D and En (the En being moved up an octave from the original for reachability) but I've since changed my mind and added it back in. I also aligned the triplets with the swung eighths in m. 8 and 10, which I forgot to do before.

Thanks!

[Static]

Excellent, I'll go ahead and accept this now.

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Static.

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