[DELETED] [GCN] Super Mario Sunshine - "Yoshi-Go-Round" by E. Gadd Industries

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Submission Information:
Series: Super Mario
Game: Super Mario Sunshine
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Yoshi-Go-Round
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: E. Gadd Industries

[E. Gadd Industries]

https://www.dropbox.com/s/qlihy0p4328h8vj/42.%20Yoshi-Go-Round.mp3?dl=1

This is probably one of the least committed pieces I've ever arranged in terms of melody. X)

[Libera]

So I had a look/listen through and, honestly speaking, this sheet needs a lot of work.  The notes, the rhythms, the visuals etc. nearly everything feels off to me when I read yours while listening to the original.  I think that you probably need to give this sheet another look over; in particular take care with the layers and the left hand accompaniment patterns.  Another specific comment is to remove the glissandos as I really don't feel like they fit in at all.

There are also a few formatting things that I'd suggest like bringing the copyright back up to zero vertical alignment and tidying up some of the voice leading lines, but I don't want to say too much about the current iteration of the sheet visually speaking because it's liable to irrelevant later on.

As always, if you need any help be sure to ask!

[Libera]

E. Gadd let me know he's going to be busy for a while so I'll archive this in the meantime.