[Wii] The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword - "Sealed Grounds" by Onionleaf

Started by Zeta, November 17, 2018, 09:16:58 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: The Legend of Zelda
Game: The Legend of Zelda: Skyward Sword
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: Sealed Grounds
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Onionleaf

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mikey

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Khunjund

Unless you're certain that your metronome indication is 100% accurate, I recommend rounding to the closest value found on a mechanical metronome (in this case, that would be 92 BPM).

At the end, you write a D.S. al Fine, but you don't have a Fine. I think just D.S. would be enough to indicate the loop. Also, I don't think it's necessary to notate passes 3 and 4 on the repeats, but that's up to you.

Personally, I'd assign the first eighth of measure 14 (and possibly 32 as well) to the left hand, as well as the G on beat four (and, similarly, the second layer F and G in measure 24). Try it out and see what you prefer.
Please stop making lists using hyphens.

mastersuperfan

Quote from: D3ath3657 on November 23, 2018, 10:48:07 PMUnless you're certain that your metronome indication is 100% accurate, I recommend rounding to the closest value found on a mechanical metronome (in this case, that would be 92 BPM).

I just checked it myself. It's 100% accurate.
Quote from: NocturneOfShadow on February 11, 2016, 03:00:36 PMthere's also a huge difference in quality between 2000 songs and 2010 songs
Quote from: Latios212 on February 11, 2016, 03:29:24 PMThe difference between 2000 songs and 2010 songs is 10 songs.

Onionleaf

Quote from: mikey on November 17, 2018, 10:24:20 PMIsn't this a request of mine that you fulfilled? <3

I wasn't aware of it, but I'm happy to hear it's now a fulfilled request. ^^

Quote from: D3ath3657 on November 23, 2018, 10:48:07 PMAt the end, you write a D.S. al Fine, but you don't have a Fine. I think just D.S. would be enough to indicate the loop. Also, I don't think it's necessary to notate passes 3 and 4 on the repeats, but that's up to you.

Personally, I'd assign the first eighth of measure 14 (and possibly 32 as well) to the left hand, as well as the G on beat four (and, similarly, the second layer F and G in measure 24). Try it out and see what you prefer.

- That makes sense, I removed the Fine and numbers 3 and 4 on the passes.
- I agree about the first eighth to be played by the left hand, but thought it would be a bit too sudden for the left hand to jump from the G down by two octaves within a short space of time. I'll try playing it on the piano tomorrow to check the playability. :)

Thanks! The files have been updated.

mikey

https://www.ninsheetmusic.org/forum/index.php?topic=5923.msg230433#msg230433
I actually forgot that this person existed and just assumed it was you because who else would arrange this song lol
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Libera

Not much for me to say here.  My main comment when I originally saw this was about the repeats and that's already been sorted out.

-I'm hearing prominent Es on those right hand dyads in the last system.
-The brace in bar 32 is bent down to the right a little bit.
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-I assume the 5 at the bottom of the first page is an accident.

The rhythms are pretty off putting in this piece, but I think everything is pretty accurate.  Nice work.

Onionleaf

Hiya, the sheet is all tidied up now, thanks! Not quite sure how that rogue 5 appeared there, lol. I tried to find it in my MUSX file but to no avail, so I edited the PDF instead. Hope that's okay.

Libera


Latios212

Sometimes Finale's default exporter will do that if you have a tuplet somewhere in the sheet...

Last comment - recommend putting a double barline between m. 10/11 for the segno. Everything else looks great!

edit: I got it
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

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