[NDS] Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney - "Ema Skye ~ Turnabout Sisters' Theme 2005" by Onionleaf

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Submission Information:
Series: Ace Attorney
Game: Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Ema Skye ~ Turnabout Sisters' Theme 2005
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Onionleaf

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[Onionleaf]

[Libera]

One of the nice things about reviewing people's sheets is that I often get to hear lots of nice pieces that I never would have listened to otherwise; this is definitely one of those times.  It looks pretty accurate so most of my comments aren't about notes.

-Saying that, the only thing I'm spotting note-wise is in bars 2, 6 and 14 I'm hearing an A in the bass like in bars 4, 8 and 16.
-I think this piece would probably be better written in C major throughout.  The Bbs all come come with those Bb chords which are just bVII chords in C major.  I'm also not sure it's worth the key signatures changes for only four bars at a time.
-Change the dotted rest in bar 8 to a crotchet and a quaver rest.
-I'd change the double dotted crotchet in bar 8 to a dotted crotchet + semiquaver for readability purposes, but if you want to keep it isn't not too bad.
-I'd suggest spacing out the systems on the first page a little bit more.  If you're worried about the second page looking less 'spacy' than the first then you could space that page out a little more to match as well.

Nice stuff.

[Onionleaf]

Heya, glad you liked the track. I agree, that is a huge aspect of what makes NSM so enjoyable to visit.

I made all the changes, except I wasn't sure if you were also referring to changing the last 5 measures to C major? I felt it would make sense to show the noticeable key change, but let me know if it's better to exclude this. Thanks!

[Libera]

Sweet, the changes look good.  If you want to keep the key signature change at the end, that's cool, but I'd put the key signature change back in for 9-12 for consistency since they're both similar sections.

[Onionleaf]

That makes sense to do, all done.

[Libera]

Sweet!

[Latios212]

One of the nice things about reviewing people's sheets is that I often get to hear lots of nice pieces that I never would have listened to otherwise; this is definitely one of those times.

Ditto. Looks good!

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