[GBA] Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue - "Bo's Theme" by Altissimo

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Submission Information:
Series: Other
Game: Hamtaro: Rainbow Rescue
Console: Game Boy Advance
Title: Bo's Theme
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Altissimo

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[Altissimo]

[joeberryosponge]

I would get rid of 8va in the bass clef line. This isn't often seen in piano music. I assume you probably didn't want to have many ledger lines. I think just keeping it in bass clef without 8va would be fine. Octaves can be assumed and are easy to read.

[Altissimo]

Sure, fixed.

[Libera]

Sorry, I meant to check this earlier but ... no point in excuses really.

-The final crotchet C# in the right hand of bar 6 I'm hearing as C# B quavers descending.
-In a number of places you have quaver tied to staccato quaver in the left hand and I think it'd look a lot clearer just as a quaver.

That's pretty much all I have, good work!

[Altissimo]

fixed

[Libera]

Woooo.

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