[PC] Yume Nikki - "The Barracks Settlement" by Rwars

Started by Zeta, September 08, 2018, 06:17:16 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Yume Nikki
Console: PC
Title: The Barracks Settlement
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Rwars

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Latios212

Two things:
- Rhythm groupings. Use tied notes to show each beat of each measure. Let me know if you need clarification.
- Watch your PDF export. Sometimes Finale will shift over pp dynamics like that; use an external printer instead.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Rwars


Latios212

Yep, that's correct! All I have left to suggest is to give the mf a bit more space to the left and right and it's good to go.
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

Quote from: Dudeman on February 22, 2016, 10:16:37 AM
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Rwars

And there we go. Moved the decrescendo and mf a bit, and now it all fits.

Libera

The pianissimo is now clashing with the end of the bar; move it a little to the left.  Also all of your rhythm groupings have gone back to being wrong.  I assume you accidentally edited an old version?

Rwars

Yep, I think I accidentally forgot to save to the musx file when I fixed the rhythm groupings. It's all fixed now, and the pp is moved to the left.

Libera


Zeta

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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