[NDS] Pokémon Ranger - "Deep Lyra Forest" by Trasdegi

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Submission Information:
Series: Pokémon
Game: Pokémon Ranger
Console: Nintendo DS
Title: Deep Lyra Forest
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Trasdegi

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[Trasdegi]

Im back, so I updated the files (octaved the flute down) and I resubmit it.

[Maelstrom]

Just a quick thing before we get into the notes, but your 8vas are clashing horribly and your margin at the top is massive.

[Trasdegi]

Ok, I'll fix that when I come back to my home and my computer (July 21th). Thanx for the feedback!

[Trasdegi]

I moved the 8va so they shouldn't clash anymore and I reduced the margin at the top, so this should be better now.

[AmpharosAndy]

I've had a look at the notes and they all seem to be correct, it's only the spelling that is a little off because of the key signature. I recommend putting the whole piece in G major and re-spelling the notes accordingly. Then you should be set!

this piece always weirds me out for some reason :S

[Trasdegi]

Here is a G major version, and could anyone who owns a better version of finale than NotePad add bar numbers?

[Trasdegi]

I think I can bump this

[Maelstrom]

It got a complete overhaul thanks to JD.
Improvements include:
Correct accidentals
A new repeat system
Bass cleffs because they're 100 times better than between the staff 8vas
an added composer
and a bunch of other stuff probably
links
[midi] [.mus] [.musx] [PDF]

[Trasdegi]

It's good for me, but I won't be able to update the op in the next 9 hours, so if you need it before you can do it.

EDIT: after one more check, I noticed than a bar is missing just after the repeat, I'll add it back later.

[Maelstrom]

Wait, what?

[Trasdegi]

Updated the files with the missing bar added back. I would just need someone to add a bass clef on it because of notepad.

[Latios212]

all finished

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This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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