[DELETED] [GCN] Bomberman Jetters - "Memories of Balloons" by GuildmasterMusic

Started by Zeta, March 20, 2017, 04:23:00 PM

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Zeta

Submission Information:

Series: Other
Game: Bomberman Jetters
Console: Nintendo GameCube
Title: Memories of Balloons
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: GuildmasterMusic

Latios212

Hey, I've seen your stuff on YouTube. Welcome to the forums and stuff!

Do you have a YouTube link so we can check things?
My arrangements and YouTube channel!

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LeviR.star

Check out my Youtube channel for remixes and original music! LeviR.star's Remixes

Also check out my piano arrangements here on my PA thread! LeviR.star's Arrangements

joeberryosponge

The rhythm in measure 2 throws me off a bit. Maybe used tied sixteenth notes to show the beat? I hear octaves in the right hand in both measure 7 and 8. Measure 7 has an 8va that isn't necessary in the bass clef. Just change the clef for that one note. Make sure the pedals don't collide with the notes, like in measure 25. Just move them all down to be consistent. Other than that, it looks great!

Maelstrom

You need your PDF to be created from the .mus file. If you need help with the formatting because notepad doesn't have all the features you need, ask here.

Maelstrom

If you edit the files and bring them up to standard (we'd love to help, but you need to ask/give permission first), feel free to submit this again.