[Wii] Kirby's Epic Yarn - "World 1: Grass Land" by Oronoco

[Zeta]

Submission Information:
Series: Kirby
Game: Kirby's Epic Yarn
Console: Nintendo Wii
Title: World 1: Grass Land
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Oronoco

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[Oronoco]

I'm incredibly happy because, for the first time, it accepted my MUSX!
I'm not sure about the colon in the title. Deku's arrangement of World 7 on site uses a ~, but the Unofficial Arrangement Thread has been using colons.

[Maelstrom]

It's good to go after 2 4 things:
Composer and arranger must be right aligned
The last system is sized at 100% instead of 90% like the rest of the piece
m10 has a strange amount of empty space on it's right
Those eighth note-dotted quarter pairs in the beginning sound detached from each other, and would be better written as slurred in pairs, rather than groups of 4.

[Oronoco]

Thank you! Check it out now. I agree with you about the slurs.

[Latios212]

Yay! (Title's fine, by the way.)

All clear!

[Zeta]

This submission has been accepted by Latios212.

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