[SNES] EarthBound - "Battle Against an Unsettling Opponent" by Yug Guy

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Submission Information:
Series: EarthBound
Game: EarthBound
Console: Super Nintendo Entertainment System
Title: Battle Against an Unsettling Opponent
Instrumentation Solo Piano
Arranger: Yug Guy

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[Yug_Guy]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6qif0oZTxpA
I tried my best with all the sharps and flats in this one, though I know it's probably not perfect.

[mikey]

Those moles truly were unsettling

[Bespinben]

The drone between m. 1-10 is D and G, not Eb and G. Same goes for m. 27-42

The drone between m. 43-46 has TWO notes, not one -- E, a 7th below D.

The drone between m. 47-50 has TWO notes, not one -- F, a 7th below Eb.

Measure 51 has another note too.

[Yug_Guy]

The drone between m. 1-10 is D and G, not Eb and G. Same goes for m. 27-42
The drone between m. 43-46 has TWO notes, not one -- E, a 7th below D.
The drone between m. 47-50 has TWO notes, not one -- F, a 7th below Eb.
Measure 51 has another note too.

OP updated with these changes. Also, do I need to change any flats to sharps in the LH, and/or sharps to flats?

[Bespinben]

do I need to change any flats to sharps in the LH, and/or sharps to flats?

Actually, you don't need to change any enharmonics, because the notes themselves are wrong.

M. 1, beat 1 -- F#, not G.
M. 1, beat 3.5 -- A, not Ab

M. 2, beat 2.5 -- Ab, not G
M. 2, beat 3 -- Db, not C
M. 2, beat 3.5 -- C, not B
M. 2, beat 4 -- Bb, not G

M. 3, beat 4.66 -- C#, not C

M. 6, beat 4.5 -- E natural, not Eb (this is a blue note, technically)
M. 7, beat 1.5 -- Ditto " "

...and that's just the start.

[Yug_Guy]

Actually, you don't need to change any enharmonics, because the notes themselves are wrong.
M. 1, beat 1 -- F#, not G...
-snip-
...and that's just the start.

Oh man, I was hoping that wouldn't be the case. Well, I think I'll try and fix some of the wrong notes tomorrow. Hopefully it should be better after going through it a second time.   

[Yug_Guy]

I've gone through the entire piece and changed any notes that were wrong. OP updated.

[Pianist Da Sootopolis]

A couple formatting things off the bat:
See if you can't bring the staves closer together on page 1. That way, you can lower all the systems and space out the title, subtitle, and composer/arranger info.
Also, 8vas under the staff should be 8lbs. If you can't do that b/c Notepad, I totally get it and I'll see about fixing it later tonight.

[Yug_Guy]

A couple formatting things off the bat:
See if you can't bring the staves closer together on page 1. That way, you can lower all the systems and space out the title, subtitle, and composer/arranger info.
Also, 8vas under the staff should be 8lbs. If you can't do that b/c Notepad, I totally get it and I'll see about fixing it later tonight.

Yeah, Notepad won't allow me to do any of that. I hate to be a bother, but could you please fix the formatting for me? I would really appreciate it.

[Bespinben]

M. 13, beat 3 -- C#, not D
M. 16, beat 3 -- Ab, not A
M. 16, beat 4 -- G, not Ab
M. 17, beat 1 -- F, not F#
M. 18, beat 4 -- E, not Eb
M. 21, beat 3 -- B, not C
M. 26, beat 3 -- E, not F
M. 33, beat 4 -- G, not Gb
M. 41, beat 4 -- G, not Gb
M. 51, beat 1 -- G, not Ab

~Misc.~
*Writing "sempre 8va bassa" would seem more efficient and uncluttering than drawing out ottava through the whole score
*The distance between D and G is an 11th. Pedal+arpeggio cannot be applied else it would ruin the articulation of the bass line. Raising D up one octave is therefore a must.

*Page layout

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